Comments received on poems by AvaRiley
Furball
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WLECOME AVA ~ Thanks for your First Poem ~ very elegant in Structure and the Subject gave us a SMILE ! I (BRIAN) am a CAT PERSON (please check our Poems !) and KITTENS are always cute & playful. MPS is primarily a POETRY SITE and yours is a proper Poem ! Full of Rhythm and four neat Rhyming Quatrains aaaa bbbb etc ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the final Stanza ~ Replete with JOY !
I share this site with my Fiancee ANGELA
Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
MPS works through reading & commenting on each other POEMS !
May 23rd, 2019 17:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WLECOME AVA ~ Thanks for your First Poem ~ very elegant in Structure and the Subject gave us a SMILE ! I (BRIAN) am a CAT PERSON (please check our Poems !) and KITTENS are always cute & playful. MPS is primarily a POETRY SITE and yours is a proper Poem ! Full of Rhythm and four neat Rhyming Quatrains aaaa bbbb etc ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the final Stanza ~ Replete with JOY !
I share this site with my Fiancee ANGELA
Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
MPS works through reading & commenting on each other POEMS !
May 23rd, 2019 17:56
Furball
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WLECOME AVA ~ Thanks for your First Poem ~ very elegant in Structure and the Subject gave us a SMILE ! I (BRIAN) am a CAT PERSON (please check our Poems !) and KITTENS are always cute & playful. MPS is primarily a POETRY SITE and yours is a proper Poem ! Full of Rhythm and four neat Rhyming Quatrains aaaa bbbb etc ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the final Stanza ~ Replete with JOY !
I share this site with my Fiancee A NGELA
Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
MPS works through reading & commenting on each other POEMS !
May 23rd, 2019 17:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WLECOME AVA ~ Thanks for your First Poem ~ very elegant in Structure and the Subject gave us a SMILE ! I (BRIAN) am a CAT PERSON (please check our Poems !) and KITTENS are always cute & playful. MPS is primarily a POETRY SITE and yours is a proper Poem ! Full of Rhythm and four neat Rhyming Quatrains aaaa bbbb etc ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the final Stanza ~ Replete with JOY !
I share this site with my Fiancee A NGELA
Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
MPS works through reading & commenting on each other POEMS !
May 23rd, 2019 17:56
Furball
SoulMeetsBody said:
Aww! Very sweet and wholesome, I can imagine being read to a young child, though I totally get the Frost comparison. Consider my heart warmed.
May 23rd, 2019 13:49
SoulMeetsBody said:
Aww! Very sweet and wholesome, I can imagine being read to a young child, though I totally get the Frost comparison. Consider my heart warmed.
May 23rd, 2019 13:49
