Comments received on poems by Kodi Lenhardt
A Salute from Heaven
Clara said:
While I am pleased this is not a true reflection for you, sadly it is for a growing number of people.... And you\'ve written it beautifully and in such a respectful way, I imagine. Similarly, I haven\'t experienced this but you\'ve done well, I think. Welcome to MPS.
October 10th, 2019 16:15
Clara said:
While I am pleased this is not a true reflection for you, sadly it is for a growing number of people.... And you\'ve written it beautifully and in such a respectful way, I imagine. Similarly, I haven\'t experienced this but you\'ve done well, I think. Welcome to MPS.
October 10th, 2019 16:15
A Salute from Heaven
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI KODI ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Welcome to MPS you will find it an empathetic site ! Thanks for your first poem (and explanation). Excellent Structure ~ in free verse ~ but a sad Subject ~ Death in the course of Duty. It is very realistic but I am relieved that it is NOT autobiographical. I live near a Garrison Town with a Parachute Regiment and Our Troops often return badly injured or even (GOD FORBID) in a Body Bag. Most are YOUNG (under 40) and it is very hard for Mothers & Fathers (especially if they are Military). The ones for whom the Demise is worst are the Partners ~ their whole future is destroyed ! You have captured this scenario elegantly in stanzas 6 & 7 ~ Thank You !
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. I share this site with ANGELA my FIANCEE. We have been 11,500 miles apart for 15 months UK & New Zealand ! Please check todays Poem *The Waitings Over* ~ Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
October 10th, 2019 12:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI KODI ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Welcome to MPS you will find it an empathetic site ! Thanks for your first poem (and explanation). Excellent Structure ~ in free verse ~ but a sad Subject ~ Death in the course of Duty. It is very realistic but I am relieved that it is NOT autobiographical. I live near a Garrison Town with a Parachute Regiment and Our Troops often return badly injured or even (GOD FORBID) in a Body Bag. Most are YOUNG (under 40) and it is very hard for Mothers & Fathers (especially if they are Military). The ones for whom the Demise is worst are the Partners ~ their whole future is destroyed ! You have captured this scenario elegantly in stanzas 6 & 7 ~ Thank You !
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. I share this site with ANGELA my FIANCEE. We have been 11,500 miles apart for 15 months UK & New Zealand ! Please check todays Poem *The Waitings Over* ~ Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
October 10th, 2019 12:51
A Salute from Heaven
Thoughts In Time said:
Never nice to lose someone that way ..when I was growing up it was compulsory and it was excellent discipline but didn’t always end nicely ...emotional write 🌹
October 10th, 2019 12:07
Thoughts In Time said:
Never nice to lose someone that way ..when I was growing up it was compulsory and it was excellent discipline but didn’t always end nicely ...emotional write 🌹
October 10th, 2019 12:07
