Opressive Rain
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Hi TEVIS ~ Welcome to MPS it is an empathetic & proactive site. Ive only been to HAWAII once but I thought I was in Heaven Thanks for your Mega Poem ~ bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm & Life ~ EXCELLENT ! For me it brought back the ANGST (Oppresive Rain) of growing up as a Teenage Boy in Liverpool (UK). Emotions & Girls ~ I had them in abundance but like yiou I found them difficult to understand & quantify ! They were from VENUS ~ I was from MARS ! Stanzas 6 to 10.
Stanzas 11 to 14 & 15 to 22 ~ Girls came & Girls went ! Stanzas 23 to 26 ~ Two more Girls ~ One you broke (emotionally ?) and One shot you (emotionally ?). It happens its all part of growing up !
So now youve put LOVE on HOLD for a while. Yes Love does seem incessent like the Rain of Unfulfilment & Oppression ! I gave up Girls for a while to concentrate on Sport & Science !
Love does take time and when I met Angela 3 years ago ~ she was 28 and a Physiotherapist ~ and I was 33 and a Science Lecturer. We were old enough (and experienced enough) to rcognise True Love when we saw it ! We are getting Married in APRIL ! So dont give up on Ladies ~ but it does take time (and blood -sweat & tears) to find the RIGHT ONE !

Thanks for sharing a very intersting & personal POEM
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Please check our site ~ Thanks.

February 25th, 2020 12:28