Comments received on poems by Hamrids
HEAL OUR LAND OH LORD (WE ARE SORRY)
Hamrids said:
There should not be casting stones, as a poet and critique I expected this while writing the poem. Any work of heart has, is and will always be expression of the inner thoughts which may not be in tandem with others. For all those who give these comment most especially Dusk Arising, you made me understand that my ink is not dried in vain and the need to do more. Thanks
April 17th, 2020 03:06
Hamrids said:
There should not be casting stones, as a poet and critique I expected this while writing the poem. Any work of heart has, is and will always be expression of the inner thoughts which may not be in tandem with others. For all those who give these comment most especially Dusk Arising, you made me understand that my ink is not dried in vain and the need to do more. Thanks
April 17th, 2020 03:06
HEAL OUR LAND OH LORD (WE ARE SORRY)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
We will lift up our eyes to the Hills
And remember our help comes from the Lord
Who created the Heavens & the Earth !
Thanks for your second Poem Hammed. Another Free Verse epic bursting with Rhythm ! Your heartfelt Prayer is a great blessing to all Believers who are Members of MPS. May GOD answer all your requests in respect of an END to this Manmade curse of COVID 19. Please check our Poem today ~ Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 16th, 2020 16:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
We will lift up our eyes to the Hills
And remember our help comes from the Lord
Who created the Heavens & the Earth !
Thanks for your second Poem Hammed. Another Free Verse epic bursting with Rhythm ! Your heartfelt Prayer is a great blessing to all Believers who are Members of MPS. May GOD answer all your requests in respect of an END to this Manmade curse of COVID 19. Please check our Poem today ~ Thanks !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 16th, 2020 16:35
HEAL OUR LAND OH LORD (WE ARE SORRY)
orchidee said:
A good write Hammed. Some, or a lot, of troubles, are caused by mankind\'s own doing, I think.
Then a few bad folk cause many \'innocent\' folk to suffer.
Unfortunately the wheat and weeds are going to grow together until the end of time, but then they will be sorted out.
April 16th, 2020 02:01
orchidee said:
A good write Hammed. Some, or a lot, of troubles, are caused by mankind\'s own doing, I think.
Then a few bad folk cause many \'innocent\' folk to suffer.
Unfortunately the wheat and weeds are going to grow together until the end of time, but then they will be sorted out.
April 16th, 2020 02:01
HEAL OUR LAND OH LORD (WE ARE SORRY)
dusk arising said:
And you think your god is going to listen this time and let you off? Just like all the other times when disaster struck but humanity wasn\'t let off?
They say it\'s a sure sign of madness to keep doing the same thing as before but expecting a different result.
Good luck, stay safe and healthy.
April 16th, 2020 01:30
dusk arising said:
And you think your god is going to listen this time and let you off? Just like all the other times when disaster struck but humanity wasn\'t let off?
They say it\'s a sure sign of madness to keep doing the same thing as before but expecting a different result.
Good luck, stay safe and healthy.
April 16th, 2020 01:30
SOUJOURNERS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening HAMMED welcome to MPS. It is a pleasure to welcome a Member from NIGERIA. MPS is a good site and it opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poetry. Thanks for your first Poem ~ Four excellent verses but a tragic Subject ~ COVID 19 ! There is a clear mesage in each of your verses.
V 1. Planet Earth continues to Rotate and Revolve rund the Sun ~ But she is very very different in 2020 than she was in 2019 ~ due to the Global scourge of COVID 19
V 2. Every person on Planet earth is affected by COVID 19 ~ irrespective of Country - Class - Colour or Creed. COVID 19 is no respecter of PERSONS !
V 3. F or too long we have taken *Nature* for granted. Despite our sophistication ~ We seem helpless when She decides to fighback against our abuse of the only Living Planet in the Solar System !
V 4. *Hell hath no fury like Nature scorned* We will die & be forgotten like other Proud Civilizations that have precceded Homo Technologicus !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Thanks Brian & Angela (my Wife) 💛💛💛
April 15th, 2020 17:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening HAMMED welcome to MPS. It is a pleasure to welcome a Member from NIGERIA. MPS is a good site and it opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poetry. Thanks for your first Poem ~ Four excellent verses but a tragic Subject ~ COVID 19 ! There is a clear mesage in each of your verses.
V 1. Planet Earth continues to Rotate and Revolve rund the Sun ~ But she is very very different in 2020 than she was in 2019 ~ due to the Global scourge of COVID 19
V 2. Every person on Planet earth is affected by COVID 19 ~ irrespective of Country - Class - Colour or Creed. COVID 19 is no respecter of PERSONS !
V 3. F or too long we have taken *Nature* for granted. Despite our sophistication ~ We seem helpless when She decides to fighback against our abuse of the only Living Planet in the Solar System !
V 4. *Hell hath no fury like Nature scorned* We will die & be forgotten like other Proud Civilizations that have precceded Homo Technologicus !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Thanks Brian & Angela (my Wife) 💛💛💛
April 15th, 2020 17:51
