Comments received on poems by searchin4Soul



Myself
L. B. Mek said:

lol, yup I understand that place you\'re writing from,
or as - us Brit\'s would say:
\'for fck sake!
giv me a sec
will ya...
can\'t hardly think
let alone: speak!\'

February 8th, 2021 05:37

Just
Doggerel Dave said:

Enjoyed your creative use of terminology here, such as \'holucination\' and \'an anapirition\' but I\'m not quite sure what they mean.
Good for you - don\'t let anyone else stick their labels or their expectations on you. Seems you\'ve got that sorted...

February 7th, 2021 18:05

Myself
Jerry Reynolds said:

Love the image, 4S

February 7th, 2021 14:30

Myself
orchidee said:

Good write Soul.
I\'m all in a tangle - am I \'me\', \'myself\', or \'I\'? That\'s 3 people! lol.

February 7th, 2021 09:44

Just
L. B. Mek said:

I really like your format for delivery, as if metaphorically and visually distilling your message to its natural ending,
wonderfully creative, an enjoyable read,
though I ask you to remember that great poem by Muhammed Ali (yeah the boxer) lol:
\'Me = We\'...
lest us stand for ourselves, but side-by-side, learning to lean on each other, when our steps falter...

February 4th, 2021 06:45

Just
b-LAH-que said:

I love the sense of individualism expressed in this piece.

February 4th, 2021 01:10

Just
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic end and as Bruce Lee said \"I\'m not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here for mine\" we each can only give a bit of light...

Great work, keep up the write.

February 4th, 2021 00:32