Comments received on poems by Locust
deadly facets of behaviour
L. B. Mek said:
a harrowing depiction
but morosely, easily recognisable:
\'a white rose
in a castle\'s garden
protected by thorns
the desolation of a callus depression
morbidly obese it exists\'..
when \'treating\' symptoms and conditions
we forget, most psychological rooted
traumas, were instigated by external influences
like those \'thorns\' - \'protecting\'
at a costly, price...
an empathetic write, thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
a harrowing depiction
but morosely, easily recognisable:
\'a white rose
in a castle\'s garden
protected by thorns
the desolation of a callus depression
morbidly obese it exists\'..
when \'treating\' symptoms and conditions
we forget, most psychological rooted
traumas, were instigated by external influences
like those \'thorns\' - \'protecting\'
at a costly, price...
an empathetic write, thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2021 04:11