Comments received on poems by Lelae
Gone
Arvy said:
The worst apart when someone\'s gone is the memories they leave behind.
August 10th, 2021 14:17
Arvy said:
The worst apart when someone\'s gone is the memories they leave behind.
August 10th, 2021 14:17
Gone
dusk arising said:
Really depicts how sadness recalls so much when someone so loved is no longer there like before. All the more poignant when it\'s your child.
Eloquent but painful to read.
August 10th, 2021 11:23
dusk arising said:
Really depicts how sadness recalls so much when someone so loved is no longer there like before. All the more poignant when it\'s your child.
Eloquent but painful to read.
August 10th, 2021 11:23
Lies
L. B. Mek said:
that poisonous, serpentine tongue
its arrowed, cadence - so hard to resist
even whilst kneeling, in the ruins of its devastation
maybe
that\'s why Van Gough, just got rid
of that betraying organ: for hearing
maybe
less dramatically, that\'s our only option
too
just, squeeze-in those Airpods real-tight
blast
our music of defiance, real - loud
and hope, that eventually our brain
will shut-up, about those missed calls
as well
(an insightful yet fun read, thanks for sharing)
August 6th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
that poisonous, serpentine tongue
its arrowed, cadence - so hard to resist
even whilst kneeling, in the ruins of its devastation
maybe
that\'s why Van Gough, just got rid
of that betraying organ: for hearing
maybe
less dramatically, that\'s our only option
too
just, squeeze-in those Airpods real-tight
blast
our music of defiance, real - loud
and hope, that eventually our brain
will shut-up, about those missed calls
as well
(an insightful yet fun read, thanks for sharing)
August 6th, 2021 04:39
Yes, Papa
Maira said:
u really pointed out a great stigma in our society..that children are becoming robots, they have to do just as told, and they have lost their creativity...and u have beautifully wrapped that up in the wealth of ur words....GREAT JOB!!
August 4th, 2021 13:53
Maira said:
u really pointed out a great stigma in our society..that children are becoming robots, they have to do just as told, and they have lost their creativity...and u have beautifully wrapped that up in the wealth of ur words....GREAT JOB!!
August 4th, 2021 13:53
Yes, Papa
L. B. Mek said:
\'But what if it all means nothing to me.\'
indeed, sometimes there isn\'t enough willpower
in the world - to protest, using our words
so we just nod and agree - till, \'They\'
and \'Their\' tyrannically totalitarian: \'Well - meaning\';
can loosen that rope, around our throat - enough
to plot an escape plan, running
to find a place, where a breath
doesn\'t come with a scrape or gravelled, cost
to our burgeoning, clueless
yet defiantly Proud, voice!
\'Our volition, is a gift - that must be won
rarely: is it offered on a platter of compassion
or tolerance\'s: understanding\'
(a great write
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
dear poet)
July 22nd, 2021 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'But what if it all means nothing to me.\'
indeed, sometimes there isn\'t enough willpower
in the world - to protest, using our words
so we just nod and agree - till, \'They\'
and \'Their\' tyrannically totalitarian: \'Well - meaning\';
can loosen that rope, around our throat - enough
to plot an escape plan, running
to find a place, where a breath
doesn\'t come with a scrape or gravelled, cost
to our burgeoning, clueless
yet defiantly Proud, voice!
\'Our volition, is a gift - that must be won
rarely: is it offered on a platter of compassion
or tolerance\'s: understanding\'
(a great write
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
dear poet)
July 22nd, 2021 03:14
