Comments received on poems by Hyane
Hazel Rows
Eugene S. said:
Your stanzas are like arrows/jolts of recognition and remembrance. Many of my early poems were about a similarly achieved and very relatable freedom. Thanks for sharing the experience. Powerful!
July 2nd, 2022 08:47
Eugene S. said:
Your stanzas are like arrows/jolts of recognition and remembrance. Many of my early poems were about a similarly achieved and very relatable freedom. Thanks for sharing the experience. Powerful!
July 2nd, 2022 08:47
The Nine Year War
L. B. Mek said:
an impressive write, and so wonderfully written;
sadly, the wide range of your metaphors and imagery
makes it hard to understand all your meaning,
but that can\'t prevent me from appreciating your poetic talent!
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
November 5th, 2021 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
an impressive write, and so wonderfully written;
sadly, the wide range of your metaphors and imagery
makes it hard to understand all your meaning,
but that can\'t prevent me from appreciating your poetic talent!
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
November 5th, 2021 03:49
Stumbling
L. B. Mek said:
this succinct write
not only works, as a stand alone immersive poem
but, as a metaphor
for so much of life\'s diverse
struggles and strife
its potential to express and empathise
and in so-doing, become a relatable read, for so many
is immensely impressive..
thank you! for choosing to share your poetic genius
November 2nd, 2021 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
this succinct write
not only works, as a stand alone immersive poem
but, as a metaphor
for so much of life\'s diverse
struggles and strife
its potential to express and empathise
and in so-doing, become a relatable read, for so many
is immensely impressive..
thank you! for choosing to share your poetic genius
November 2nd, 2021 04:14
Stumbling
robin jayne said:
i really enjoyed reading this one, thank you for sharing!
November 1st, 2021 14:49
robin jayne said:
i really enjoyed reading this one, thank you for sharing!
November 1st, 2021 14:49
Hectic Kite Episodes
L. B. Mek said:
without context, sadly
I lack the intellect to unravel and appreciate this enticingly unique poem,
but your artistry and poetic sincerity, that\'s just glaringly obvious
even to those lacking, like me..
thanks for choosing to share
September 27th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
without context, sadly
I lack the intellect to unravel and appreciate this enticingly unique poem,
but your artistry and poetic sincerity, that\'s just glaringly obvious
even to those lacking, like me..
thanks for choosing to share
September 27th, 2021 06:10
Hazel Rows
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Abuse is difficult to deal with . Sorry you had to experience that . A good piece of writing ...
September 1st, 2021 01:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Abuse is difficult to deal with . Sorry you had to experience that . A good piece of writing ...
September 1st, 2021 01:24
For The Sake Of It
L. B. Mek said:
\'The floating isles catch my eyes.
The upside-down cars upon the highway puzzle me.\'
(of fleeting chance
and those queuing, to glean a clue)
\'The purple skies alarm me as well.
There are so many missing textures, but—\'
(Overwhelming anxiety from expectant anticipation
of which nuanced details, we can sense but can\'t grasp)
\'This constant buzzing in my ears.
The overwhelming white noise in my mind.\'
(The pressure building from within
The lack of connecting thread, to our scattered musings)..
I\'ll say again, for anyone wo cares to acknowledge
(in my humble opinion)
there is a lot of depth to your - supposed, nonsense poem;
thanks for choosing to share, your insightful wisdom!
July 30th, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'The floating isles catch my eyes.
The upside-down cars upon the highway puzzle me.\'
(of fleeting chance
and those queuing, to glean a clue)
\'The purple skies alarm me as well.
There are so many missing textures, but—\'
(Overwhelming anxiety from expectant anticipation
of which nuanced details, we can sense but can\'t grasp)
\'This constant buzzing in my ears.
The overwhelming white noise in my mind.\'
(The pressure building from within
The lack of connecting thread, to our scattered musings)..
I\'ll say again, for anyone wo cares to acknowledge
(in my humble opinion)
there is a lot of depth to your - supposed, nonsense poem;
thanks for choosing to share, your insightful wisdom!
July 30th, 2021 04:05
Lighting Strikes
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a lot of depth
to your nonsense, dear poet
keep striving and growing
your poetic talent deserves nothing less
be it for hobby or merely, self-realised: fate
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for choosing to share
July 29th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a lot of depth
to your nonsense, dear poet
keep striving and growing
your poetic talent deserves nothing less
be it for hobby or merely, self-realised: fate
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for choosing to share
July 29th, 2021 04:32
