Comments received on poems by Valerie Alexandra
I\'ll Hold You To Afterlife
Accidental Poet said:
This plays a song so sweet on my heartstrings. Brought to mind my love of 54 years. Beautiful write Valerie. š
August 19th, 2021 18:48
Accidental Poet said:
This plays a song so sweet on my heartstrings. Brought to mind my love of 54 years. Beautiful write Valerie. š
August 19th, 2021 18:48
Left to Bleed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Iām the source of your pain, he said
Then, he kissed me goodbye
Ever so lightly, ever so shortly
And right then and there
My heart was ripped out of my rib cage\'..
what\'s really most impressive
is how succinctly you worded
such distinctly raw feelings
to a traumatic experience
that so many of us can relate with
and yet, we find it hard to express
our own experiences, with such clarity..
(a really well executed write
hope you find someone
worthy of you, eventually
thanks for sharing)
August 19th, 2021 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Iām the source of your pain, he said
Then, he kissed me goodbye
Ever so lightly, ever so shortly
And right then and there
My heart was ripped out of my rib cage\'..
what\'s really most impressive
is how succinctly you worded
such distinctly raw feelings
to a traumatic experience
that so many of us can relate with
and yet, we find it hard to express
our own experiences, with such clarity..
(a really well executed write
hope you find someone
worthy of you, eventually
thanks for sharing)
August 19th, 2021 02:50
Left to Bleed
Doggerel Dave said:
I can only vote as ep above: The pain will fade, heal, get better.
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August 18th, 2021 18:04
Doggerel Dave said:
I can only vote as ep above: The pain will fade, heal, get better.
Welcome to MPS (Traditional greeting here) Please don\'t forget to reply, comment freely and let MPS remain the lively place it is.
August 18th, 2021 18:04
Left to Bleed
The elder poet said:
They say in time all wounds will heal .I believe everyone in the world has had a broken heart . Lost loves thaat they thought were true loves. Do not rush into another relationship. The right person will come along and bring back those butterfly\'s . Thank you for sharing .
August 18th, 2021 15:22
The elder poet said:
They say in time all wounds will heal .I believe everyone in the world has had a broken heart . Lost loves thaat they thought were true loves. Do not rush into another relationship. The right person will come along and bring back those butterfly\'s . Thank you for sharing .
August 18th, 2021 15:22
