Comments received on poems by Míchel Lex



A Slow Death
L. B. Mek said:

those last two last lines are very poignant
indeed, there\'s a lifeline - of difference
between, what people claim
and what tangible results, their claims yield!
and yet,
even our fury in others flagrant fallacy
is a utility, we an weaponise
to weave together, our own tethers
and maybe someday, they\'ll be enough
of a rope, to cling - to
when all else, has failed...
\'fight, the good fight
leave no room for futile, regret!\'
all I have are empty words and hopeful wishes
though pitiful, their still imbued with enough sincerity
to help tighten those tethers, you someday may cultivate!
(thank you! for choosing to share
these words - too
is a choice you\'re making: to fight...)
and no one! can ask anymore of you than that

September 6th, 2021 06:45

A Slow Death
orchidee said:

Good write M.
It\'s easy to say, but we have to take a step to start with, out of the \'box\'. We may not feel like doing so at times.

September 6th, 2021 01:44