Comments received on poems by 1uhleeuh
You & I Again
L. B. Mek said:
till, we get it right?
and again, after we go and mess up
what we got right, for a while..
if you\'ve experienced the kinda love that has images rolling through mind, day and night
makes you feel full, without taking a bite
makes you feel hollow and empty, after eating your 3rd helping..
if you know that kinda love, then you also know
we\'ll all do anything, to have it colour our life, rainbows or Goth bleak..
again n again
why? because it will all be worth it, if it ever clicks into place..
(really liked your utilisation of the word \'again\', to highlight and emphasis the frustration and despair the writer is feeling, while calmly writing these words, thanks for sharing)
September 14th, 2021 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
till, we get it right?
and again, after we go and mess up
what we got right, for a while..
if you\'ve experienced the kinda love that has images rolling through mind, day and night
makes you feel full, without taking a bite
makes you feel hollow and empty, after eating your 3rd helping..
if you know that kinda love, then you also know
we\'ll all do anything, to have it colour our life, rainbows or Goth bleak..
again n again
why? because it will all be worth it, if it ever clicks into place..
(really liked your utilisation of the word \'again\', to highlight and emphasis the frustration and despair the writer is feeling, while calmly writing these words, thanks for sharing)
September 14th, 2021 03:04
You & I Again
iAli said:
I will read again,
And I will like this poem again.
great lines...❤
Love has no other desires but to fulfill itself.
September 13th, 2021 23:28
iAli said:
I will read again,
And I will like this poem again.
great lines...❤
Love has no other desires but to fulfill itself.
September 13th, 2021 23:28