Comments received on poems by Zemde
Song of the Midnight Sun
Caring dove said:
Interesting read … good choice of words ))
January 26th, 2022 02:10
Caring dove said:
Interesting read … good choice of words ))
January 26th, 2022 02:10
Song of the Midnight Sun
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven!
what a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 25th, 2022 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully woven!
what a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 25th, 2022 05:29
Song of the Midnight Sun
sophin said:
stunning job, zemde. each line filled my mind with such vivid imagery.
January 24th, 2022 22:01
sophin said:
stunning job, zemde. each line filled my mind with such vivid imagery.
January 24th, 2022 22:01
Memento Mori
Paul Bell said:
Some in natures garden might justly say that the dust part of man is the best part.
December 5th, 2021 05:39
Paul Bell said:
Some in natures garden might justly say that the dust part of man is the best part.
December 5th, 2021 05:39
Memento Mori
Lorna said:
Really beautifully done piece of poetry.... I\'d flunk the last question though but that doesn\'t change the artistry.....
December 5th, 2021 04:56
Lorna said:
Really beautifully done piece of poetry.... I\'d flunk the last question though but that doesn\'t change the artistry.....
December 5th, 2021 04:56
Disco at the Panic
L. B. Mek said:
\'An embodiment
of the all too common \"crappy diem.\"
\'It won\'t prestidigitate the oatmeal
into lobster tail, but
the music and the lighting
makes the flavor, well
bearable.\'
December 2nd, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'An embodiment
of the all too common \"crappy diem.\"
\'It won\'t prestidigitate the oatmeal
into lobster tail, but
the music and the lighting
makes the flavor, well
bearable.\'
December 2nd, 2021 04:50
She was Born a Princess / To my future wife
dusk arising said:
Blimey she sounds wonderful, you\'ll have to be twice as wonderful to be able to attract her.... are you??? LOL.
November 17th, 2021 10:38
dusk arising said:
Blimey she sounds wonderful, you\'ll have to be twice as wonderful to be able to attract her.... are you??? LOL.
November 17th, 2021 10:38
Color
spilleronsheet said:
That speaks nothing lasts forever
Great one dear poet
November 16th, 2021 01:26
spilleronsheet said:
That speaks nothing lasts forever
Great one dear poet
November 16th, 2021 01:26
Perspective
Caring dove said:
A fun writing ! Great read , about a snail and acorn 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 03:11
Caring dove said:
A fun writing ! Great read , about a snail and acorn 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 03:11
Bard\'s Cant
jarcher54 said:
Blades in their sockets... that\'s gotta hurt! I don\'t know why I like this little victory chant, but I do!
November 4th, 2021 01:05
jarcher54 said:
Blades in their sockets... that\'s gotta hurt! I don\'t know why I like this little victory chant, but I do!
November 4th, 2021 01:05
Ode to a Poet
L. B. Mek said:
words Ali himself would have been proud to have penned, I think
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you\'re Awesome!
November 2nd, 2021 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
words Ali himself would have been proud to have penned, I think
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you\'re Awesome!
November 2nd, 2021 05:12
Ode to a Poet
spilleronsheet said:
Thankful to you for these beautiful words to the great poets who are so passionate and so simple at heart…to the chaotic world, a poet is a window who can show a different world from nature to politics …from romance to fantasies…from serious social issues to spirituality…from surreal to reality…an ode to all the great poets who are so curious about everything
Well crafted dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 02:04
spilleronsheet said:
Thankful to you for these beautiful words to the great poets who are so passionate and so simple at heart…to the chaotic world, a poet is a window who can show a different world from nature to politics …from romance to fantasies…from serious social issues to spirituality…from surreal to reality…an ode to all the great poets who are so curious about everything
Well crafted dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 02:04
Icarus Down
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write.
look forward to reading more of your work;
October 22nd, 2021 12:13
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write.
look forward to reading more of your work;
October 22nd, 2021 12:13
Icarus Down
L. B. Mek said:
Percy Bysshe Shelley, would have liked your poem, I think
I have no better way, to praise the poetic ambition, you bravely display in this great write
thanks for sharing, dear poet..
(although Rameses II and his 100 plus children
may not, easily - approve
me thinks
\'what is that?\'
oh yes, yes, beloved Coleridge
we still remember your Kubla Khan
who was foiled by the stormy waves
on the shores of Japan, but see
I\'m sorry but you never bothered to finish any of your poetry
so we\'re gonna stay celebrating Shelley
and no, we\'re distinctly Choosing - to ignore, his personal life
we\'ve all had enough of \'context\',
thank you very much!)
ahem, forgive me that inner poetry nerd just got loose, for a second
will quickly tuck it way
before it says anything more unseemly, lol
October 19th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
Percy Bysshe Shelley, would have liked your poem, I think
I have no better way, to praise the poetic ambition, you bravely display in this great write
thanks for sharing, dear poet..
(although Rameses II and his 100 plus children
may not, easily - approve
me thinks
\'what is that?\'
oh yes, yes, beloved Coleridge
we still remember your Kubla Khan
who was foiled by the stormy waves
on the shores of Japan, but see
I\'m sorry but you never bothered to finish any of your poetry
so we\'re gonna stay celebrating Shelley
and no, we\'re distinctly Choosing - to ignore, his personal life
we\'ve all had enough of \'context\',
thank you very much!)
ahem, forgive me that inner poetry nerd just got loose, for a second
will quickly tuck it way
before it says anything more unseemly, lol
October 19th, 2021 05:14
a glass of sunshine
L. B. Mek said:
this is a very intimate portrayal, a wide angled view of actions and their explanations,
that cause and effect of reality, we like to ignore
because its easier, to point fingers and blame
in a world with only right and wrong as daylight\'s, shades..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
wonderful details for characterisation
October 8th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
this is a very intimate portrayal, a wide angled view of actions and their explanations,
that cause and effect of reality, we like to ignore
because its easier, to point fingers and blame
in a world with only right and wrong as daylight\'s, shades..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
wonderful details for characterisation
October 8th, 2021 04:30
Stitches
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Seeing the strength and the weakness .. in someone . You really expressed this nicely
September 29th, 2021 11:10
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Seeing the strength and the weakness .. in someone . You really expressed this nicely
September 29th, 2021 11:10
Sidewalk Puddles
Caring dove said:
Really like this 🙂I like how you have given the puddle some feelings , and there’s some sadness there at the end of the poem ... as if those who walk by do not think of the puddle at all . I especially like the last few lines
September 28th, 2021 15:56
Caring dove said:
Really like this 🙂I like how you have given the puddle some feelings , and there’s some sadness there at the end of the poem ... as if those who walk by do not think of the puddle at all . I especially like the last few lines
September 28th, 2021 15:56
A Summer Night\'s Serenade
L. B. Mek said:
If only, we could actually Sale
an appreciation of Nature\'s gifts
to our Youth
like we so expertly Market, that Pagan xmas Tree
and those Capitalist virtues, we adorn it with....!!!
(Another, well \'thought out\' and exceptionally Vivid write,
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet):
\'Up we marched into the hilltops.
Kids in flip-flops,
Dogs and brown hogs.
Fairies flitting,
nymphs a-swimming
Eagerly to see the sight.
Then, amidst the starlit hilltop
grew a tree of moss and hyssop.
Flowers dripping with a softly glowing nectar smelling sweet and light
So they drank the nectar deeply.\'
September 23rd, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
If only, we could actually Sale
an appreciation of Nature\'s gifts
to our Youth
like we so expertly Market, that Pagan xmas Tree
and those Capitalist virtues, we adorn it with....!!!
(Another, well \'thought out\' and exceptionally Vivid write,
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet):
\'Up we marched into the hilltops.
Kids in flip-flops,
Dogs and brown hogs.
Fairies flitting,
nymphs a-swimming
Eagerly to see the sight.
Then, amidst the starlit hilltop
grew a tree of moss and hyssop.
Flowers dripping with a softly glowing nectar smelling sweet and light
So they drank the nectar deeply.\'
September 23rd, 2021 05:23
Cherries
L. B. Mek said:
\'But never comes the sweet without the sour.
A balance that will never ever vary.\'
very impressive, I laud the time invested to produce such a smooth, layered and insightful work of classic poetry
this was a privilege to read, thanks for sharing
September 23rd, 2021 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'But never comes the sweet without the sour.
A balance that will never ever vary.\'
very impressive, I laud the time invested to produce such a smooth, layered and insightful work of classic poetry
this was a privilege to read, thanks for sharing
September 23rd, 2021 03:55
Without Word of Rain
rebmasters said:
Stunning - I admire the allure of your alliteration x
September 16th, 2021 06:44
rebmasters said:
Stunning - I admire the allure of your alliteration x
September 16th, 2021 06:44
Without Word of Rain
L. B. Mek said:
in the old days, we could run into red telephone booth\'s in the UK, to hide from the elements..
inside, maybe you\'re not alone
and maybe you\'ve got some music to add
to the the physical intimacy of the moment and one half of an earphone, to share with your significant other
and maybe, while its minus temperatures outside, its sizzling hot inside
and your very breadth, exudes a heady fog of magnetic delight..
or maybe, that\'s all an imagined scene, but
still, it was a nice realm to visit even for a mirage, of fleeting Time...
(thanks for sharing, such a moody romantic depiction of the season, inspired me to reply a feeble scribble of my own)
September 16th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
in the old days, we could run into red telephone booth\'s in the UK, to hide from the elements..
inside, maybe you\'re not alone
and maybe you\'ve got some music to add
to the the physical intimacy of the moment and one half of an earphone, to share with your significant other
and maybe, while its minus temperatures outside, its sizzling hot inside
and your very breadth, exudes a heady fog of magnetic delight..
or maybe, that\'s all an imagined scene, but
still, it was a nice realm to visit even for a mirage, of fleeting Time...
(thanks for sharing, such a moody romantic depiction of the season, inspired me to reply a feeble scribble of my own)
September 16th, 2021 05:00
