Comments received on poems by Sibo
A-way (?)
L. B. Mek said:
loved the last two stanzas
almost operating as stand alone mirrors, of each other
voicing the cause and those cocooned in its escapism - effects,
poisoner\'s/hunters and us willing victims..
insightful commentary and well written poetry,
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
loved the last two stanzas
almost operating as stand alone mirrors, of each other
voicing the cause and those cocooned in its escapism - effects,
poisoner\'s/hunters and us willing victims..
insightful commentary and well written poetry,
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:14
Ultima Ferria
L. B. Mek said:
\'My mornings are kissing with others
And cones me again on the telephone
Was it always like this
or just before
Words words words
Retorten salvaged souls\'
nothing wrong with letting our artistry traverse surrealism\'s realms,
in search of answers to that inevitability Void, of our shared futures..
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
September 30th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'My mornings are kissing with others
And cones me again on the telephone
Was it always like this
or just before
Words words words
Retorten salvaged souls\'
nothing wrong with letting our artistry traverse surrealism\'s realms,
in search of answers to that inevitability Void, of our shared futures..
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
September 30th, 2021 04:47
Feast
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Welcome, craving one
May our court
Be springing thine rise-up
As it fortunate ends
In sakura-coloured sea of clouds\'
September 28th, 2021 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Welcome, craving one
May our court
Be springing thine rise-up
As it fortunate ends
In sakura-coloured sea of clouds\'
September 28th, 2021 03:31
Oh, Babel
L. B. Mek said:
thank you for introducing him to us
this is such a well written dedication, it says thousands gathered in public to pay their respects, fitting
for a profession designed to gift relief to the public..
thanks for sharing
may he R.I.P.
(I\'ll try and see one of his works
I\'m a \'failed\' fan of French cinema, especially comedies)
September 27th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
thank you for introducing him to us
this is such a well written dedication, it says thousands gathered in public to pay their respects, fitting
for a profession designed to gift relief to the public..
thanks for sharing
may he R.I.P.
(I\'ll try and see one of his works
I\'m a \'failed\' fan of French cinema, especially comedies)
September 27th, 2021 05:29
