Comments received on poems by Bill Smith Parker Sr.
My drinking and my last song
Coyote said:
Heartfelt and very moving verse. Beautifully penned.
November 16th, 2021 17:07
Coyote said:
Heartfelt and very moving verse. Beautifully penned.
November 16th, 2021 17:07
The intrinsic value of words
Paul Bell said:
I would say the cavemen gave us poetry through art, and we all added the words.
October 22nd, 2021 11:25
Paul Bell said:
I would say the cavemen gave us poetry through art, and we all added the words.
October 22nd, 2021 11:25
The intrinsic value of words
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent word-usage in this very readable piece - one which I intent reading again hence it goes into my list of favourites while saying a big thank you for such a captivating read.
October 22nd, 2021 09:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent word-usage in this very readable piece - one which I intent reading again hence it goes into my list of favourites while saying a big thank you for such a captivating read.
October 22nd, 2021 09:31
The intrinsic value of words
L. B. Mek said:
Art came before words
and Relatability, existed before Art
and here you\'ve encompassed, that Poetic Art of Relatability
reaching-out, beyond
the ambitions of your words...
(an impactful and important write, ambitious and brave in your undertaking
and executed with the practised ease, of a passionate wordsmith..
thanks for sharing!)
indeed let us all, look forward
to a time where race
refers only to self identity and that childhood naivety
where competing at foot speeds, equated
to all our troubles in life...
October 22nd, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
Art came before words
and Relatability, existed before Art
and here you\'ve encompassed, that Poetic Art of Relatability
reaching-out, beyond
the ambitions of your words...
(an impactful and important write, ambitious and brave in your undertaking
and executed with the practised ease, of a passionate wordsmith..
thanks for sharing!)
indeed let us all, look forward
to a time where race
refers only to self identity and that childhood naivety
where competing at foot speeds, equated
to all our troubles in life...
October 22nd, 2021 05:40
Driver Brother #1
L. B. Mek said:
definitely makes me interested in reading the series of poems its introducing,
thanks for sharing
(may need some editing, if being considered for submission or self publishing)
October 22nd, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
definitely makes me interested in reading the series of poems its introducing,
thanks for sharing
(may need some editing, if being considered for submission or self publishing)
October 22nd, 2021 04:23
Her best life
Paul Bell said:
I think people should deserve the best, unfortunately most don\'t and hang on in there in misery.
October 20th, 2021 12:44
Paul Bell said:
I think people should deserve the best, unfortunately most don\'t and hang on in there in misery.
October 20th, 2021 12:44
Her best life
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing ! 🙂
October 20th, 2021 11:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing ! 🙂
October 20th, 2021 11:22
Just the
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
I guess time is just lost whisper once you reach this milestone on a souls journey.
October 19th, 2021 20:26
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
I guess time is just lost whisper once you reach this milestone on a souls journey.
October 19th, 2021 20:26
Romance Birmingham city
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yeah , miserable . I guess a lot of things can make us feel that way . It’s so confusing to feel “ lost “ need to find our centre , somehow .. I guess
October 19th, 2021 06:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yeah , miserable . I guess a lot of things can make us feel that way . It’s so confusing to feel “ lost “ need to find our centre , somehow .. I guess
October 19th, 2021 06:02
Romance Birmingham city
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing ) not nice to lose someone , and to feel confused
October 19th, 2021 05:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing ) not nice to lose someone , and to feel confused
October 19th, 2021 05:05
Just the
Paul Bell said:
This could be a fine epitaph.
Where the hell did the time go to.
So slow when you\'re young, too bloody fast when you\'re old.
October 16th, 2021 06:36
Paul Bell said:
This could be a fine epitaph.
Where the hell did the time go to.
So slow when you\'re young, too bloody fast when you\'re old.
October 16th, 2021 06:36
