Comments received on poems by cbdave
THE WORD
dusk arising said:
Tell that to the martyrs. Really poor logic in that last line.
November 9th, 2021 18:44
dusk arising said:
Tell that to the martyrs. Really poor logic in that last line.
November 9th, 2021 18:44
LIVING FOR THE LORD
dusk arising said:
Ooh you must be so much holier than me. Or is it your OCD showing up.
November 4th, 2021 06:22
dusk arising said:
Ooh you must be so much holier than me. Or is it your OCD showing up.
November 4th, 2021 06:22
WHO IS GREATER THAN YOU LORD
dusk arising said:
I wonder how often you worship physically or is it just a paper declaration to help you ease the guilt christianity has given you?
November 1st, 2021 00:03
dusk arising said:
I wonder how often you worship physically or is it just a paper declaration to help you ease the guilt christianity has given you?
November 1st, 2021 00:03
WHO IS GREATER THAN YOU LORD
orchidee said:
Good write Dave.
I could possibly fit some of your words to hymn-poems, if you wish?
October 31st, 2021 06:00
orchidee said:
Good write Dave.
I could possibly fit some of your words to hymn-poems, if you wish?
October 31st, 2021 06:00
BLESSED
Paul Bell said:
I think the meek collectively win wars, but are coerced by the powerful to stay in power.
October 30th, 2021 05:36
Paul Bell said:
I think the meek collectively win wars, but are coerced by the powerful to stay in power.
October 30th, 2021 05:36
BLESSED
dusk arising said:
Instilled with fear of god at a young age by christians or just gullible? Who blessed you by the way?
October 30th, 2021 04:15
dusk arising said:
Instilled with fear of god at a young age by christians or just gullible? Who blessed you by the way?
October 30th, 2021 04:15
I STAND AT THE DOOR
Paul Bell said:
I\'m always wary of getting stopped, like they know my past life better than me.
October 28th, 2021 06:44
Paul Bell said:
I\'m always wary of getting stopped, like they know my past life better than me.
October 28th, 2021 06:44
A CROWN OF THORNS
dusk arising said:
And then he buggered off and was never heard of again.... too good to be true.... but some ppl like a good man made fairy tale.
October 25th, 2021 03:48
dusk arising said:
And then he buggered off and was never heard of again.... too good to be true.... but some ppl like a good man made fairy tale.
October 25th, 2021 03:48
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