Comments received on poems by Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla
Can a lesbian speak?
Draven said:
Silence is not an option. Thank you for sharing this.
December 9th, 2021 19:16
Draven said:
Silence is not an option. Thank you for sharing this.
December 9th, 2021 19:16
Can Gay Speak?
L. B. Mek said:
while I laud, your attempt
to bring the inescapable ugliness in our world today
to a willingly-indifferent, Society
and create more awareness;
your need, to Prioritise
the wording of useless Rage
outweighing
your Wish, to depict the Injustice
only insures
that only fools, like me
react
to your, Blatant
inciteful attempts at aggravating
anyone and everyone
just
so your words garner, what pitiful attention
you can..
(I just can\'t help, but try
to point-out to you, the futility of your methodology)
You must Engage
with your Audience
to create, Interest and build
some sense of camaraderie
Try to remove
that easy, escape
most, choose to grasp;
that projected fallacy reasoning
of: A - them
and A - Us, in Ignorance\'s difference
allowing for manifestations
of \'Convenient\': apathy!
(but if all you want
is to rage, Rage and rage
the go ahead, hope it helps)
I\'ve done what I can, sadly...
All the Best!
November 22nd, 2021 07:16
L. B. Mek said:
while I laud, your attempt
to bring the inescapable ugliness in our world today
to a willingly-indifferent, Society
and create more awareness;
your need, to Prioritise
the wording of useless Rage
outweighing
your Wish, to depict the Injustice
only insures
that only fools, like me
react
to your, Blatant
inciteful attempts at aggravating
anyone and everyone
just
so your words garner, what pitiful attention
you can..
(I just can\'t help, but try
to point-out to you, the futility of your methodology)
You must Engage
with your Audience
to create, Interest and build
some sense of camaraderie
Try to remove
that easy, escape
most, choose to grasp;
that projected fallacy reasoning
of: A - them
and A - Us, in Ignorance\'s difference
allowing for manifestations
of \'Convenient\': apathy!
(but if all you want
is to rage, Rage and rage
the go ahead, hope it helps)
I\'ve done what I can, sadly...
All the Best!
November 22nd, 2021 07:16
Hindutva\'s subtle ideology
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned, informative
and as-ever searching/questioning
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned, informative
and as-ever searching/questioning
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 06:13
Denial of denial
L. B. Mek said:
\'Historically, you denied me
in the name of disclaimer.\'
places and faces of tyrannical genocide, may change
but the tactics: they remain - ever
the same...
(thanks for sharing)
November 16th, 2021 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Historically, you denied me
in the name of disclaimer.\'
places and faces of tyrannical genocide, may change
but the tactics: they remain - ever
the same...
(thanks for sharing)
November 16th, 2021 06:34
Who am I?
notformymother said:
Incredibly powerful and insightful.
Don\'t forget:
You are an artist, a poet, an intellect, a valued person, and a beautiful contribution to our world.
Thank you for sharing this, it was really fulfilling to read
November 15th, 2021 21:05
notformymother said:
Incredibly powerful and insightful.
Don\'t forget:
You are an artist, a poet, an intellect, a valued person, and a beautiful contribution to our world.
Thank you for sharing this, it was really fulfilling to read
November 15th, 2021 21:05
Who am I?
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lost my identity for 6000 years.
I lost my human identity.
I lost my human status.
I lost my existentialism.
I lost my being.
I lost myself.
I lost my dignity.
I lost my personality.
You subjected me
You depersonalized me.
You demoralized me.
I did not exist.\'
keep writing
keep sharing
keep informing
keep Believing
Keep Fighting!
if there - be, but One
Voice!
then, your embers of Hope
for change - await
for that spark of Awareness
to insure, your cause
may finally, be Heard
and eventually - Even
Confronted!
corrected, and one Day
rectified!
November 15th, 2021 08:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lost my identity for 6000 years.
I lost my human identity.
I lost my human status.
I lost my existentialism.
I lost my being.
I lost myself.
I lost my dignity.
I lost my personality.
You subjected me
You depersonalized me.
You demoralized me.
I did not exist.\'
keep writing
keep sharing
keep informing
keep Believing
Keep Fighting!
if there - be, but One
Voice!
then, your embers of Hope
for change - await
for that spark of Awareness
to insure, your cause
may finally, be Heard
and eventually - Even
Confronted!
corrected, and one Day
rectified!
November 15th, 2021 08:10
Dalit girl: Naanna or Dad, I want to go to school...
Saxon Crow said:
We are so ignorant to the world. What a reality shared in this 21st century. Very powerful words Suryaraju. I can feel your anger for these people
November 14th, 2021 03:36
Saxon Crow said:
We are so ignorant to the world. What a reality shared in this 21st century. Very powerful words Suryaraju. I can feel your anger for these people
November 14th, 2021 03:36
An untouchable is forced to eat Feces
dusk arising said:
I agree with L.B. Mek\'s comments above.
Beware of disgusting your reader. Your point is valid but poorly presented here.
November 12th, 2021 06:00
dusk arising said:
I agree with L.B. Mek\'s comments above.
Beware of disgusting your reader. Your point is valid but poorly presented here.
November 12th, 2021 06:00
An untouchable is forced to eat Feces
L. B. Mek said:
\'crude wording, only promotes
deaf ears: to your cause...\'
which is such a shame
because everything you\'re saying needs, to be voiced!
I suggest you try emptying your pent-up anger
before you start writing
that way, instead of just adding more of your infuriated petrol
to an already burning world, you may actually
engage with your readers and help us reduce our ignorance...
these vulgar rants are just a waste of your talent and awareness
(of course I apologise for my rudeness, but
if you can find your way
to a space beyond being, reactionarily enraged
you may find their is some truth to my words)
November 12th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'crude wording, only promotes
deaf ears: to your cause...\'
which is such a shame
because everything you\'re saying needs, to be voiced!
I suggest you try emptying your pent-up anger
before you start writing
that way, instead of just adding more of your infuriated petrol
to an already burning world, you may actually
engage with your readers and help us reduce our ignorance...
these vulgar rants are just a waste of your talent and awareness
(of course I apologise for my rudeness, but
if you can find your way
to a space beyond being, reactionarily enraged
you may find their is some truth to my words)
November 12th, 2021 05:55
Thus Untouchable Speaks...
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your bravery!
(thanks for sharing)..
I just wish next time you verse something this crude in wording
your empathy will extend to clicking that 🔞 button,
even as just a mere gesture, in defiance
a last ounce
of sensibility, in this morbidly deranged world
we help, curate
with every choice we make...
November 11th, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your bravery!
(thanks for sharing)..
I just wish next time you verse something this crude in wording
your empathy will extend to clicking that 🔞 button,
even as just a mere gesture, in defiance
a last ounce
of sensibility, in this morbidly deranged world
we help, curate
with every choice we make...
November 11th, 2021 03:48
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