Comments received on poems by Jewelia
Elements of Growth
L. B. Mek said:
\'We spend so much energy
making love mysterious
only to know exactly
when it’s happened and how it is going to end,
like the rips by the thorns you didn’t see in the woods
I had to pass through this,
I had to have it this way,
left stinging
Misunderstanding
is just something we miss, and
we can only miss it if we once had it\'
\'We call that tragedy, and melancholy
and I don’t cry about tragedies
I cry about breathing and the moon
I am here and knowing myself
And I feel
like I am drowning in my eyes\'..
(just these highlighted lines above
make for a decadent poem!
you have a wonderful poetic talent
for expressing: without needlessly exaggerating,
such a unique, gift!
all I can do, is thank you
for choosing to share, your wonderful
talent with us, and wish you
all the best
in your poetry\'s journey)
a Great read!
January 10th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'We spend so much energy
making love mysterious
only to know exactly
when it’s happened and how it is going to end,
like the rips by the thorns you didn’t see in the woods
I had to pass through this,
I had to have it this way,
left stinging
Misunderstanding
is just something we miss, and
we can only miss it if we once had it\'
\'We call that tragedy, and melancholy
and I don’t cry about tragedies
I cry about breathing and the moon
I am here and knowing myself
And I feel
like I am drowning in my eyes\'..
(just these highlighted lines above
make for a decadent poem!
you have a wonderful poetic talent
for expressing: without needlessly exaggerating,
such a unique, gift!
all I can do, is thank you
for choosing to share, your wonderful
talent with us, and wish you
all the best
in your poetry\'s journey)
a Great read!
January 10th, 2022 05:35
Highrise
Mae Spragg said:
Such wonderful wording. \"I was far below and above the floors\" and \"I could be noticed finally, for how small I am\", both of those lines I really relate too and I adore the way you have written them.
November 9th, 2021 15:02
Mae Spragg said:
Such wonderful wording. \"I was far below and above the floors\" and \"I could be noticed finally, for how small I am\", both of those lines I really relate too and I adore the way you have written them.
November 9th, 2021 15:02
Highrise
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you have to be in the ditch, down and out before someone eventually saves you. Onwards and upwards.
November 9th, 2021 05:34
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you have to be in the ditch, down and out before someone eventually saves you. Onwards and upwards.
November 9th, 2021 05:34