Comments received on poems by jk
sharing the sky
Alleyeyes said:
Very short and sweet. Something to whisper in their ear when they become yours. Well done and thank you to the sky.
September 3rd, 2022 13:36
Alleyeyes said:
Very short and sweet. Something to whisper in their ear when they become yours. Well done and thank you to the sky.
September 3rd, 2022 13:36
sharing the sky
Lincoln said:
Wow! Short, romantic, and enticing. Keep it up.
September 2nd, 2022 17:49
Lincoln said:
Wow! Short, romantic, and enticing. Keep it up.
September 2nd, 2022 17:49
maybe
shaa said:
What if????😔 I hate that question yet it always runs in my mind. Your words hit deep. Nicely penned.
September 2nd, 2022 08:05
shaa said:
What if????😔 I hate that question yet it always runs in my mind. Your words hit deep. Nicely penned.
September 2nd, 2022 08:05
maybe
arqios said:
oh, deep and so true! The what if always gets us in the end. Thanks for sharing.
September 1st, 2022 21:18
arqios said:
oh, deep and so true! The what if always gets us in the end. Thanks for sharing.
September 1st, 2022 21:18
broken pieces
L. B. Mek said:
of remnant fragments
that accumulate, to manifest
what warmth, we excavate
for ourselves - in our heart,
and what wisdom, we glean
from the rivers in our mistakes;
indeed, we Must - cherish
all those influences, in our lives
that help curate
the \'Who\', in what we are
and
the what: of \'Who\' we Aspire
to become...
(a brilliant poem
I connected with your meaning, on a somewhat surreal level of intuitive relatability,
or maybe
I\'m just lost in my own mirage
of selfish, interpretation
but still, I thank you - humbly
for choosing to share
these choice, words of wisdom)
November 15th, 2021 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
of remnant fragments
that accumulate, to manifest
what warmth, we excavate
for ourselves - in our heart,
and what wisdom, we glean
from the rivers in our mistakes;
indeed, we Must - cherish
all those influences, in our lives
that help curate
the \'Who\', in what we are
and
the what: of \'Who\' we Aspire
to become...
(a brilliant poem
I connected with your meaning, on a somewhat surreal level of intuitive relatability,
or maybe
I\'m just lost in my own mirage
of selfish, interpretation
but still, I thank you - humbly
for choosing to share
these choice, words of wisdom)
November 15th, 2021 05:51
broken pieces
melellendixon said:
this is so so beautiful. torn straight from my heart. amazing job
November 15th, 2021 00:38
melellendixon said:
this is so so beautiful. torn straight from my heart. amazing job
November 15th, 2021 00:38
broken pieces
Nicholas Browning said:
I know the feeling well. Thank you for the post! Best regards.
November 14th, 2021 21:23
Nicholas Browning said:
I know the feeling well. Thank you for the post! Best regards.
November 14th, 2021 21:23