Comments received on poems by belladonna
Have you ever wondered?
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The articulation is marvelous, the poetic language is very sounding and the sequencing is superb. It\'s an admirable work of art. Handcrafted. I love it.
November 19th, 2021 08:55
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The articulation is marvelous, the poetic language is very sounding and the sequencing is superb. It\'s an admirable work of art. Handcrafted. I love it.
November 19th, 2021 08:55
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Coyote said:
Excellent write! If this is your first attempt, I can\'t wait to see what follows🙂
November 18th, 2021 12:28
Coyote said:
Excellent write! If this is your first attempt, I can\'t wait to see what follows🙂
November 18th, 2021 12:28
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dusk arising said:
You have a delightful natural talent and the content or message contained in your post is first class.
You ask how to improve, well firstly you appear streets ahead of most who post on here for the first time. Read a lot of the poetry posted here on MPS and be critical of it in your own mind, to your own standards. When you see something good, something you like, try to absorb how it was created or how it was seen by the author.... envisage approaching a subject from a similar angle.... becoming more versatile will definitely improve your ability which is already of a very high standard.
WElcome to MPS. Please join in and comment upon the poetry of others posted on here. Feel free to throw stones at my scribblings.
November 18th, 2021 09:20
dusk arising said:
You have a delightful natural talent and the content or message contained in your post is first class.
You ask how to improve, well firstly you appear streets ahead of most who post on here for the first time. Read a lot of the poetry posted here on MPS and be critical of it in your own mind, to your own standards. When you see something good, something you like, try to absorb how it was created or how it was seen by the author.... envisage approaching a subject from a similar angle.... becoming more versatile will definitely improve your ability which is already of a very high standard.
WElcome to MPS. Please join in and comment upon the poetry of others posted on here. Feel free to throw stones at my scribblings.
November 18th, 2021 09:20
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L. B. Mek said:
a good read, thanks for sharing
if you\'re just trying poetry for the first time
don\'t worry about improving;
in-fact, this may be
the best time in your poetic adventure
simply enjoy experimenting
delighting, in the joy
of placing one word, aside
its perfect - awaiting, next
and have fun
let your creativity fly free
write what you want,
how you want
and as long as it doesn\'t, uselessly offend or antagonise people
then all, is covered under that forgiving umbrella of creative self-expression;
try reading, see what you like
and more importantly
what you don\'t like
and always, always: enjoy the ride
set no quotas
or defined targets
only write if you feel inspired - to
and only aim, for something if you deem,
the attempt itself will yield, its own rewards...
November 18th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
a good read, thanks for sharing
if you\'re just trying poetry for the first time
don\'t worry about improving;
in-fact, this may be
the best time in your poetic adventure
simply enjoy experimenting
delighting, in the joy
of placing one word, aside
its perfect - awaiting, next
and have fun
let your creativity fly free
write what you want,
how you want
and as long as it doesn\'t, uselessly offend or antagonise people
then all, is covered under that forgiving umbrella of creative self-expression;
try reading, see what you like
and more importantly
what you don\'t like
and always, always: enjoy the ride
set no quotas
or defined targets
only write if you feel inspired - to
and only aim, for something if you deem,
the attempt itself will yield, its own rewards...
November 18th, 2021 05:47
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belladonna said:
This is me trying poetry for the first time,
Please let me know how can I improve my writing.
Thank you!
November 18th, 2021 02:17
belladonna said:
This is me trying poetry for the first time,
Please let me know how can I improve my writing.
Thank you!
November 18th, 2021 02:17
