Comments received on poems by @14teen
Bye
Paul Bell said:
This feels like a death, maybe known, but no pain at the end.
January 9th, 2022 09:57
Paul Bell said:
This feels like a death, maybe known, but no pain at the end.
January 9th, 2022 09:57
4th Down
Alex Arnot said:
I like the way you show the continual descent into madness. Eerie, but also makes for great rhythm.
December 30th, 2021 01:09
Alex Arnot said:
I like the way you show the continual descent into madness. Eerie, but also makes for great rhythm.
December 30th, 2021 01:09
Pathetic
Paul Bell said:
Nothing wrong with being mean, though, mean and lean is better.
No chance of a fork in the road, not with the potholes anyway.
December 28th, 2021 12:17
Paul Bell said:
Nothing wrong with being mean, though, mean and lean is better.
No chance of a fork in the road, not with the potholes anyway.
December 28th, 2021 12:17
Turn
Paul Bell said:
I suppose life is a succession of learning curves. In saying that, I\'m still learning.
December 27th, 2021 13:59
Paul Bell said:
I suppose life is a succession of learning curves. In saying that, I\'m still learning.
December 27th, 2021 13:59
Lacking
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking someone ain\'t playing the game, and the door is open, goodbye.
December 10th, 2021 12:08
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking someone ain\'t playing the game, and the door is open, goodbye.
December 10th, 2021 12:08
