Comments received on poems by 94sidrak
The secret sign
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read,
and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little
self-indulgent rant below, lol)
my thing about that shows, ending
is why not just have them, both
die
why, only kill the female Lead, character
who
carried the franchise all those seasons?
why she, gotta be twisted into some
fantastical depiction of evil..
like all the other lead females;
if those hack writer\'s
couldn\'t wait for the Author
to finish the book
and they were adamant they wanted a morbid ending
as a meaninglessly, tepid swansong
for all the ketchup spilled
and deplorably depicted, rape scenes
why not, just have both characters
kill each other, burn
the whole thing into ashes
so we can all forget, those last rushed episodes
for the cope-out\'s they were...)
January 18th, 2022 08:15
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read,
and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little
self-indulgent rant below, lol)
my thing about that shows, ending
is why not just have them, both
die
why, only kill the female Lead, character
who
carried the franchise all those seasons?
why she, gotta be twisted into some
fantastical depiction of evil..
like all the other lead females;
if those hack writer\'s
couldn\'t wait for the Author
to finish the book
and they were adamant they wanted a morbid ending
as a meaninglessly, tepid swansong
for all the ketchup spilled
and deplorably depicted, rape scenes
why not, just have both characters
kill each other, burn
the whole thing into ashes
so we can all forget, those last rushed episodes
for the cope-out\'s they were...)
January 18th, 2022 08:15
The magical note
dave z said:
I\'ve been following you Youngblood you\'re up and running, you are blocking the noise and doing what makes sidrak sidrak (I hope that\'s your name) once again keep this up I see that you had a little fun with this one and don\'t worry about gloating as you have too much to gloat about :)
December 11th, 2021 11:50
dave z said:
I\'ve been following you Youngblood you\'re up and running, you are blocking the noise and doing what makes sidrak sidrak (I hope that\'s your name) once again keep this up I see that you had a little fun with this one and don\'t worry about gloating as you have too much to gloat about :)
December 11th, 2021 11:50
A simple man
dave z said:
From one victim to another I feel u brother times can get hard just block out the scary thoughts and keep pushing for this urge to release some stress in the form of this sublime art it\'ll take u to places you would want to go and just keep this up, \'shoot for the stars...\'
December 8th, 2021 11:07
dave z said:
From one victim to another I feel u brother times can get hard just block out the scary thoughts and keep pushing for this urge to release some stress in the form of this sublime art it\'ll take u to places you would want to go and just keep this up, \'shoot for the stars...\'
December 8th, 2021 11:07
A simple man
dave z said:
From one victim to another I feel u brother times can get hard just block out the scary thoughts and keep pushing for this urge to release some stress in the form of this sublime art it\'ll take u to places you would want to go and just keep this up, \'shoot for the stars...\'
December 8th, 2021 10:16
dave z said:
From one victim to another I feel u brother times can get hard just block out the scary thoughts and keep pushing for this urge to release some stress in the form of this sublime art it\'ll take u to places you would want to go and just keep this up, \'shoot for the stars...\'
December 8th, 2021 10:16
A simple man
L. B. Mek said:
the disparity of cruelty in our world
and its astoundingly ambivalent attitude
to a life\'s worth, is ever a subject
worthy of poetic verse
but still, while we despair and roar
our anguish, remember
we be finite creatures, never promised
a second\'s, worth of existence
it be our own foolish pride, that forgets - that
assuming our warm homes
and seemingly just actions, makes us worthy
of living an unblemished life;
ignoring
the wailing of those arounds us
until, ill-fate decrees
our cries be added to that cacophonous harmony
of life...
(a wonderful narrative poem, thanks for sharing)
December 6th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
the disparity of cruelty in our world
and its astoundingly ambivalent attitude
to a life\'s worth, is ever a subject
worthy of poetic verse
but still, while we despair and roar
our anguish, remember
we be finite creatures, never promised
a second\'s, worth of existence
it be our own foolish pride, that forgets - that
assuming our warm homes
and seemingly just actions, makes us worthy
of living an unblemished life;
ignoring
the wailing of those arounds us
until, ill-fate decrees
our cries be added to that cacophonous harmony
of life...
(a wonderful narrative poem, thanks for sharing)
December 6th, 2021 06:14
