Comments received on poems by Nisha Shekhawat
LIVE AGAIN
dusk arising said:
This speaks to me of preparing one\'s self for the bountys of the life ahead with the wisdom of not letting the past taint one\'s attitude.
A mature write. An attitude seen to be missing from the majority which can taint one\'s future happiness.
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December 10th, 2021 16:48
dusk arising said:
This speaks to me of preparing one\'s self for the bountys of the life ahead with the wisdom of not letting the past taint one\'s attitude.
A mature write. An attitude seen to be missing from the majority which can taint one\'s future happiness.
Welcome to MPS. This place works best if we read and comment upon other poets writing on here. You\'ll probably make peot pals along the way. Please feel free to throw stones at anything i post on here.
December 10th, 2021 16:48
LIVE AGAIN
L. B. Mek said:
we are fallible by Nature\'s design
and unlike the games, we design
there is no last saved point
for us to respawn - to,
no second chances at life
or do-overs, we simply make the best
of our fated opportunity\'s
while striving to forget
our many regrets;
acceptance, is all we have
to insure we make the best
of our dice throw\'s, in life...
and I too agree, utilising our poetry
as a window to introspection
yields more insight, than any mirror we\'ll ever own...
(\'in my humble opinion\'
thanks for sharing
and all the best
in your questing journey for self worth!)
December 10th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
we are fallible by Nature\'s design
and unlike the games, we design
there is no last saved point
for us to respawn - to,
no second chances at life
or do-overs, we simply make the best
of our fated opportunity\'s
while striving to forget
our many regrets;
acceptance, is all we have
to insure we make the best
of our dice throw\'s, in life...
and I too agree, utilising our poetry
as a window to introspection
yields more insight, than any mirror we\'ll ever own...
(\'in my humble opinion\'
thanks for sharing
and all the best
in your questing journey for self worth!)
December 10th, 2021 05:10
