Comments received on poems by jinlikesgin



hopeless dreams, so sweet and promising.
dusk arising said:

Well this is a very good start here on mps for your great desire to be realised. You use English very well. May I suggest you read MANY of the poems posted here on mps to assist you. Some may make you wince, other may leave you wishing you could write equally well which, for me proved very helpful and encouraging.
Welcome to mps. We are a largely friendly bunch. This site works best if we all read and comment upon others poetry, making poetic pals along the way. Please do join in.

December 19th, 2021 12:58