Comments received on poems by Larry Flâneur
Tainted Nostalgia
L. B. Mek said:
\'Slept to try and hide from life
Though restless nights now plague me,
Dreams lift me from my strife
But I remember them so vaguely.
Apathy to the world around me
You keep on passing me by:
Affectionately still besides the sea
Where we flourished in a lie.\'
love these verses!
what a wonderful poetic talent
you choose to cultivate and share
I wish you all the best
with your inking ambitions, dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
December 23rd, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Slept to try and hide from life
Though restless nights now plague me,
Dreams lift me from my strife
But I remember them so vaguely.
Apathy to the world around me
You keep on passing me by:
Affectionately still besides the sea
Where we flourished in a lie.\'
love these verses!
what a wonderful poetic talent
you choose to cultivate and share
I wish you all the best
with your inking ambitions, dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share
December 23rd, 2021 04:41