Comments received on poems by A.D. Small
Captivated
A.D. Small said:
I wrote this in october of 2011 lol. You are very silly i wrote it for my husband. Out of all the poetry ive lost throughout my life i only have 38 poems saved sadly the rest are gone.
January 9th, 2022 13:57
A.D. Small said:
I wrote this in october of 2011 lol. You are very silly i wrote it for my husband. Out of all the poetry ive lost throughout my life i only have 38 poems saved sadly the rest are gone.
January 9th, 2022 13:57
Captivated
orchidee said:
Erm, I can\'t recall when we met. Was it 2011, when you wrote this, or before? I\'m sure it\'s about me! lol.
January 9th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
Erm, I can\'t recall when we met. Was it 2011, when you wrote this, or before? I\'m sure it\'s about me! lol.
January 9th, 2022 03:18
Tomb
Eugene S. said:
As a fellow runaway, I understand the sentiment. My experience was long ago, but it never goes away. My first poem on this site is my dedication to that fateful day and it is a thread that flows through a lot of my writings. I\'m anxious to read more of yours. Thank you for your contribution.
January 8th, 2022 04:59
Eugene S. said:
As a fellow runaway, I understand the sentiment. My experience was long ago, but it never goes away. My first poem on this site is my dedication to that fateful day and it is a thread that flows through a lot of my writings. I\'m anxious to read more of yours. Thank you for your contribution.
January 8th, 2022 04:59
As long as you got me
L. B. Mek said:
love that feel of youthful certainty
a portrayal of instinctive connection
or love, before
it has been wilted, by Time
in-to a shallow, shadow
of itself, at origination..
a wonderful read, really liked
the unrelenting pacing
to accentuate
the belief and verve
in the poetic voice, you depict..
thanks for sharing
January 7th, 2022 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
love that feel of youthful certainty
a portrayal of instinctive connection
or love, before
it has been wilted, by Time
in-to a shallow, shadow
of itself, at origination..
a wonderful read, really liked
the unrelenting pacing
to accentuate
the belief and verve
in the poetic voice, you depict..
thanks for sharing
January 7th, 2022 06:19
As long as you got me
orchidee said:
Ooohh, you mean me?! I never knew! heehee. Good write AD.
January 7th, 2022 03:30
orchidee said:
Ooohh, you mean me?! I never knew! heehee. Good write AD.
January 7th, 2022 03:30
Taste of Victory
A.D. Small said:
Only natural products here buddy lol. I was just bored the other day.
January 6th, 2022 10:02
A.D. Small said:
Only natural products here buddy lol. I was just bored the other day.
January 6th, 2022 10:02
A Crayon\'s Life
L. B. Mek said:
outstanding execution!
kept that light, fun element
yet subtly introduced
such deeply profound commentary
a great read!
\' If crayons wore pants too
Would they have one leg or two\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
outstanding execution!
kept that light, fun element
yet subtly introduced
such deeply profound commentary
a great read!
\' If crayons wore pants too
Would they have one leg or two\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2022 05:25
A Crayon\'s Life
orchidee said:
They get shorter as their life goes on - felt-tips, wax, or sharpening crayons made of wood.
January 5th, 2022 03:16
orchidee said:
They get shorter as their life goes on - felt-tips, wax, or sharpening crayons made of wood.
January 5th, 2022 03:16
I fly
A.D. Small said:
Thank you so much for your encouragement I greatly appreciate it!!!!
January 2nd, 2022 03:24
A.D. Small said:
Thank you so much for your encouragement I greatly appreciate it!!!!
January 2nd, 2022 03:24
Jupiter
Paul Bell said:
Some loves are just out of this planet, this sounds like one of them.
December 31st, 2021 05:00
Paul Bell said:
Some loves are just out of this planet, this sounds like one of them.
December 31st, 2021 05:00
Jupiter
orchidee said:
A little chilly there too, around -145C.
We could go there on winter hols! lol.
December 31st, 2021 03:09
orchidee said:
A little chilly there too, around -145C.
We could go there on winter hols! lol.
December 31st, 2021 03:09
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