Comments received on poems by A.D. Small



Captivated
A.D. Small said:

I wrote this in october of 2011 lol. You are very silly i wrote it for my husband. Out of all the poetry ive lost throughout my life i only have 38 poems saved sadly the rest are gone.

January 9th, 2022 13:57

Captivated
orchidee said:

Erm, I can\'t recall when we met. Was it 2011, when you wrote this, or before? I\'m sure it\'s about me! lol.

January 9th, 2022 03:18

Tomb
Eugene S. said:

As a fellow runaway, I understand the sentiment. My experience was long ago, but it never goes away. My first poem on this site is my dedication to that fateful day and it is a thread that flows through a lot of my writings. I\'m anxious to read more of yours. Thank you for your contribution.

January 8th, 2022 04:59

Tomb
orchidee said:

To lighten the theme - ahhh, a bad hair day there?! lol.

January 8th, 2022 03:18

As long as you got me
L. B. Mek said:

love that feel of youthful certainty
a portrayal of instinctive connection
or love, before
it has been wilted, by Time
in-to a shallow, shadow
of itself, at origination..
a wonderful read, really liked
the unrelenting pacing
to accentuate
the belief and verve
in the poetic voice, you depict..
thanks for sharing

January 7th, 2022 06:19

As long as you got me
orchidee said:

Ooohh, you mean me?! I never knew! heehee. Good write AD.

January 7th, 2022 03:30

Taste of Victory
A.D. Small said:

Only natural products here buddy lol. I was just bored the other day.

January 6th, 2022 10:02

Taste of Victory
orchidee said:

What you smoking there?! oohh!

January 6th, 2022 03:22

A Crayon\'s Life
L. B. Mek said:

outstanding execution!
kept that light, fun element
yet subtly introduced
such deeply profound commentary
a great read!
\' If crayons wore pants too
Would they have one leg or two\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and Happy New Year!

January 5th, 2022 05:25

A Crayon\'s Life
orchidee said:

They get shorter as their life goes on - felt-tips, wax, or sharpening crayons made of wood.

January 5th, 2022 03:16

Timeless love
A.D. Small said:

Thank you

January 3rd, 2022 02:43

Timeless love
orchidee said:

Food write AD.

January 2nd, 2022 03:34

I fly
A.D. Small said:

Thank you so much for your encouragement I greatly appreciate it!!!!

January 2nd, 2022 03:24

I fly
Rozina said:

Beautiful words of Love.

January 1st, 2022 18:36

Jupiter
Paul Bell said:

Some loves are just out of this planet, this sounds like one of them.

December 31st, 2021 05:00

Jupiter
orchidee said:

A little chilly there too, around -145C.
We could go there on winter hols! lol.

December 31st, 2021 03:09

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