As long as you got me
L. B. Mek said:

love that feel of youthful certainty
a portrayal of instinctive connection
or love, before
it has been wilted, by Time
in-to a shallow, shadow
of itself, at origination..
a wonderful read, really liked
the unrelenting pacing
to accentuate
the belief and verve
in the poetic voice, you depict..
thanks for sharing

January 7th, 2022 06:19

Taste of Victory
A.D. Small said:

Only natural products here buddy lol. I was just bored the other day.

January 6th, 2022 10:02

A Crayon\'s Life
L. B. Mek said:

outstanding execution!
kept that light, fun element
yet subtly introduced
such deeply profound commentary
a great read!
\' If crayons wore pants too
Would they have one leg or two\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and Happy New Year!

January 5th, 2022 05:25

Timeless love
A.D. Small said:

Thank you

January 3rd, 2022 02:43

I fly
A.D. Small said:

Thank you so much for your encouragement I greatly appreciate it!!!!

January 2nd, 2022 03:24

Jupiter
Paul Bell said:

Some loves are just out of this planet, this sounds like one of them.

December 31st, 2021 05:00