Comments received on poems by ianshatss



A Moments Glimpse
Dahlia said:

wholehearted very nice
hold that hope & know he is in your heart...
Dahlia

April 7th, 2022 13:17

The Goddess of the Deep
L. B. Mek said:

we - so, need to be more aware
of \'Water\'s\' importance
to our continued existence
yes carbon levels, matter
but our H2O crisis, is just
as alarming...!
thank you! for your wonderfully worded, dedication
and for creating much needed
awareness..
an important write!

March 25th, 2022 05:31

Underestimated by the Overestimated
L. B. Mek said:

(really enjoyed your self affirming, wording
of defiant, self reliance and fortitude
in the face of society\'s, obsession
with fake social ladder games
cyclically, regurgitating
those playground mindsets of submission
in the name of belonging\'s, featherweight protection..
such an empowering read and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'there\'s power in humility
behind every great hero or heroine
are the deep thinkers
who shared their wisdom and guidance
but their accolades, cup\'s
are filled by waterfalls of
self excavated, worth
that few, can identify with..\'
(and often
their biggest challenge
comes from balancing
that tightrope, between
ego and wisdom)..


March 14th, 2022 05:12

Another Storm is Coming
AMusings said:

I love this, thunderstorms are natures way of making us remember how fragile we are, and the whole thing makes us feel alive

February 6th, 2022 19:21

Another Storm is Coming
Rozina said:

You have painted a fantastic picture of a thunderstorm. There are frequent thunderstorms in my country and it looks and sounds just like your poem!

February 4th, 2022 22:03

Beautiful Chaos
Alexander Pope III said:

Terrified I am, of her changing mind as. These lines very good

February 4th, 2022 21:47

Another Storm is Coming
Alexander Pope III said:

A graphic view of Thunderstorm in your poem. Excellent

February 4th, 2022 21:46

Beautiful Chaos
ianshatss said:

Thank you! Definitely means a lot!

February 4th, 2022 20:27

Beautiful Chaos
L. B. Mek said:

some wonderful imagery,
thanks for sharing

January 10th, 2022 06:09

Beautiful Chaos
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words )) good poem .

January 10th, 2022 01:07