Comments received on poems by sunday_high



Alone
spilleronsheet said:

A sad mind dwell grief
Painted the canvas with those cherished reel
Behind penning were his emotions
Yet its hard to decipher why the stabbed words sounded good
To that poet the reader replies
A sad poet
Conveyed the tears to the reader on other side
How good it was
The emotion was brief
Full of grief
Beauty lay in those words carrying the emotions inside
Sadly those emotions were hurt
The reader wish to convey best wishes to cherish those memories
And build new memories not to replace the earlier ones
But to frame new as you stay
While penning
your emotions would roll
Bleed the sheet you hold
Won’t be easy to let go
So cherish the lost one inside
Yet do justice to soul inside
Best of luck dear poet
Hope to see new paintings on the canvas of yours

January 11th, 2022 02:37

Alone
spilleronsheet said:

That’s truly deep and painted with emotions of love
Well crafted dear poet
Welcome to mps
Keep writing and sharing dear poet

January 10th, 2022 12:02