Comments received on poems by Jainshalini
Solitude
L. B. Mek said:
dessert sands mirages, aren\'t known
to be a healthy guide
towards excavating that sincerity, from deep
within ourselves,
maybe best, to begin with acceptance
instead, and that
rather hard to admit, fact
about any form of solitude:
first and foremost
it\'s a choice, we each make for ourselves
very rare
that\'s it is, a choice
Made, for us..
in a world of billions, if
we really wanted - to
we can find one individual, to communicate with, at a meaningfully sincere level;
and that\'s all it would take
to end our feelings of solitude and alienation from the world...
(anyway, that my feeble 2 cents worth
of thought, on such a deep topic
but what do I know) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
wonderfully written, a great read
January 25th, 2022 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
dessert sands mirages, aren\'t known
to be a healthy guide
towards excavating that sincerity, from deep
within ourselves,
maybe best, to begin with acceptance
instead, and that
rather hard to admit, fact
about any form of solitude:
first and foremost
it\'s a choice, we each make for ourselves
very rare
that\'s it is, a choice
Made, for us..
in a world of billions, if
we really wanted - to
we can find one individual, to communicate with, at a meaningfully sincere level;
and that\'s all it would take
to end our feelings of solitude and alienation from the world...
(anyway, that my feeble 2 cents worth
of thought, on such a deep topic
but what do I know) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
wonderfully written, a great read
January 25th, 2022 05:13
