Comments received on poems by lando15



The grief of the willow tree
FallenAngel1🕊 said:

The grief of the willow tree
The grief of my brain
As I tried to read
An ongoing sentence
That forever remained
Only one capital letter
The very first word
My eyes turn red\'r
Than feathers of a bird
Only one comma,no periods,not one break
Too hard to read. Maybe a dream? Am I even awake?

February 22nd, 2022 08:58