Comments received on poems by simpilicity



dandelions
L. B. Mek said:

so much impassioned imagery
an emotive read..
thanks for sharing
\'suddenly the music stops
he looks at her
colors start exploding around the room
blue green violet purple pink orange yellow
she smiles
i blink
im her\'

\'begin to weep to the keys of the music as he turns his head towards the piano

he never turns to look at her again\'

March 11th, 2022 05:20