Comments received on poems by all that i can see
the lies that you told me
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
this is when kindness, literally
hurts and causes undue pain..
a relatable write, thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
this is when kindness, literally
hurts and causes undue pain..
a relatable write, thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 04:48
the truth lies ahead
all that i can see said:
i don’t really think that this one is 18+, i just rated it because i mentioned self harm.
take care y’all
March 22nd, 2022 08:10
all that i can see said:
i don’t really think that this one is 18+, i just rated it because i mentioned self harm.
take care y’all
March 22nd, 2022 08:10
out of pain out of rage
jark said:
I love the line, \"i’m filling up my lungs with tears\". Crying is a simple word to express a feeling, choking on your tears even is a weak figure of speech to me, but to drown in them, lungs collapsing under the weight of a broke heart. Expanding full of tears cried hard. Heart break is brutal, thank you for sharing this poem.
March 20th, 2022 16:49
jark said:
I love the line, \"i’m filling up my lungs with tears\". Crying is a simple word to express a feeling, choking on your tears even is a weak figure of speech to me, but to drown in them, lungs collapsing under the weight of a broke heart. Expanding full of tears cried hard. Heart break is brutal, thank you for sharing this poem.
March 20th, 2022 16:49
out of pain out of rage
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad . Sorry your in pain .. maybe the other person is silent for a reason , I’m not sure . Take care
March 20th, 2022 15:24
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad . Sorry your in pain .. maybe the other person is silent for a reason , I’m not sure . Take care
March 20th, 2022 15:24
