Comments received on poems by Jeffry Vos
Please Be Offended
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I like your caricature play
on alarmist, sensationalism
while juxtaposing, society\'s
general apathy
to the daily horrors we\'re bombarded by..
\'The 3rd World War is NOW and we *its artillery.\'
how much more prophetic, these words
may read, in a few weeks/months/years...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 1st, 2022 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I like your caricature play
on alarmist, sensationalism
while juxtaposing, society\'s
general apathy
to the daily horrors we\'re bombarded by..
\'The 3rd World War is NOW and we *its artillery.\'
how much more prophetic, these words
may read, in a few weeks/months/years...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 1st, 2022 04:15
Sky Net Dirty Jet
L. B. Mek said:
oh my indeed!
only, we couldn\'t wait
for our Computers to turn on us
we just had to see, for ourselves
what those big red buttons, did...
(a timely shorty
and that Sky Net reference
hits home! great imagery
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
oh my indeed!
only, we couldn\'t wait
for our Computers to turn on us
we just had to see, for ourselves
what those big red buttons, did...
(a timely shorty
and that Sky Net reference
hits home! great imagery
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 05:37
MASKED FREEDOM
L. B. Mek said:
\'to mask or not to mask\'
as our wanton distractions
to that monotonous COVID
of everyday modernity\'s, strife..
while our reality\'s, metaphorically - literal
hands
continue to go unwashed...?
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
March 22nd, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'to mask or not to mask\'
as our wanton distractions
to that monotonous COVID
of everyday modernity\'s, strife..
while our reality\'s, metaphorically - literal
hands
continue to go unwashed...?
(an intriguing read, thanks for sharing)
March 22nd, 2022 05:45
