Comments received on poems by Rosey
Suffocating Darkness
RSM0812 said:
This poems tittle is well put into words with this piece. I especially like the last line. Suffocating in the darkness. Powerful and well written. \"Burried alive behind my eyes\". The rhythm and Metre are both also perfectly on par. Great job.
June 8th, 2025 09:53
RSM0812 said:
This poems tittle is well put into words with this piece. I especially like the last line. Suffocating in the darkness. Powerful and well written. \"Burried alive behind my eyes\". The rhythm and Metre are both also perfectly on par. Great job.
June 8th, 2025 09:53
Suffocating Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful loaded with wonderful images and metaphor. (Thoughts like teeth gnash at my bones) so vivid. What a splendid depiction of internal anguish. A fave
June 7th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful loaded with wonderful images and metaphor. (Thoughts like teeth gnash at my bones) so vivid. What a splendid depiction of internal anguish. A fave
June 7th, 2025 12:57
Scars
orchidee said:
It makes me shudder. I was at a self-help group, and tales of cutting, though understanding why they do it.
July 13th, 2022 13:45
orchidee said:
It makes me shudder. I was at a self-help group, and tales of cutting, though understanding why they do it.
July 13th, 2022 13:45
Am I fine?
orchidee said:
We do it though - we may not know the person well enough; not want to tell them why we may not be OK; not want to give them a blow-by-blow account; etc.
Some - maybe a few - we know more fully; feel we can confide in them; find life is bit better after, say, a cup of tea and a slice of cake together. I sound like Worzel Gummidge there. lol.
July 13th, 2022 13:43
orchidee said:
We do it though - we may not know the person well enough; not want to tell them why we may not be OK; not want to give them a blow-by-blow account; etc.
Some - maybe a few - we know more fully; feel we can confide in them; find life is bit better after, say, a cup of tea and a slice of cake together. I sound like Worzel Gummidge there. lol.
July 13th, 2022 13:43
I FUCKING hate you.
Poet Lees said:
I\'ve been there. It sucks. This goes out to everyone whose hurt me, and there have been a LOT. Thanks for helping me release just a little bit more of the anger from a lifetime of abuse. Appreciate it.
July 13th, 2022 09:11
Poet Lees said:
I\'ve been there. It sucks. This goes out to everyone whose hurt me, and there have been a LOT. Thanks for helping me release just a little bit more of the anger from a lifetime of abuse. Appreciate it.
July 13th, 2022 09:11
I FUCKING hate you.
Raven333 said:
I LOVED IT... this poem was me telling every bitch that has hurt me physically and mentally.. great write
July 12th, 2022 05:30
Raven333 said:
I LOVED IT... this poem was me telling every bitch that has hurt me physically and mentally.. great write
July 12th, 2022 05:30
I FUCKING hate you.
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
good way to utilise, Poetry
let it all out
July 12th, 2022 02:43
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
good way to utilise, Poetry
let it all out
July 12th, 2022 02:43
Am I fine?
Goldfinch60 said:
At my age I now respond \" Well I got up this morning so all is well\".
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
At my age I now respond \" Well I got up this morning so all is well\".
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:23
Scars
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You are absolutely right here. They are a reminder that we carried on when it was difficult.
April 2nd, 2022 20:40
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You are absolutely right here. They are a reminder that we carried on when it was difficult.
April 2nd, 2022 20:40
Deranged
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I can relate to this as I feel that sadly, I\'m in a manipulative family. The way your own blood can have the audacity to exploit you is so disheartening. But you conveyed the message greatly.
April 1st, 2022 12:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I can relate to this as I feel that sadly, I\'m in a manipulative family. The way your own blood can have the audacity to exploit you is so disheartening. But you conveyed the message greatly.
April 1st, 2022 12:18
Deranged
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how your words reflect
the lyrics in Seal\'s \'Crazy\'..
thanks for sharing
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq8hdNMfArc )
April 1st, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how your words reflect
the lyrics in Seal\'s \'Crazy\'..
thanks for sharing
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq8hdNMfArc )
April 1st, 2022 05:51
The Darkness
Christina8 said:
I\'m sorry you are in this place, I have some dark past poetry too. Great write and thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:44
Christina8 said:
I\'m sorry you are in this place, I have some dark past poetry too. Great write and thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:44
The Darkness
Rocky Lagou said:
Raw and vulnerable. I can relate as I believe everyone can. Really well put.
March 31st, 2022 08:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Raw and vulnerable. I can relate as I believe everyone can. Really well put.
March 31st, 2022 08:28
The Darkness
MDStone said:
I appreciate the open and honest message. It is a part of us, but only a part, it is not us! Keep sharing. Thank you for your poem.
March 31st, 2022 06:05
MDStone said:
I appreciate the open and honest message. It is a part of us, but only a part, it is not us! Keep sharing. Thank you for your poem.
March 31st, 2022 06:05
The Darkness
Paul Bell said:
I think this is possibly the lowest you can get down to. The human condition we all hate.
March 31st, 2022 04:40
Paul Bell said:
I think this is possibly the lowest you can get down to. The human condition we all hate.
March 31st, 2022 04:40
Depresso Expresso
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow that was a strong final line. It really hit, hopefully self-love and acceptance will be on the horizon.
March 28th, 2022 12:52
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow that was a strong final line. It really hit, hopefully self-love and acceptance will be on the horizon.
March 28th, 2022 12:52
