Comments received on poems by Rosey
Sudden Shifts
Paul Bell said:
It seems the human way, we get knocked down, we get back up.
Sure, there\'s a song there.
Though when I watch my football team, we never get back up.
October 30th, 2025 09:14
Paul Bell said:
It seems the human way, we get knocked down, we get back up.
Sure, there\'s a song there.
Though when I watch my football team, we never get back up.
October 30th, 2025 09:14
Sudden Shifts
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor used in this poem to convey the injury imparted and suffered. Well done
October 30th, 2025 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor used in this poem to convey the injury imparted and suffered. Well done
October 30th, 2025 07:49
Never Enough to be Me
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem speaks of what holds one back from being themself. Nicely written.
October 29th, 2025 16:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem speaks of what holds one back from being themself. Nicely written.
October 29th, 2025 16:15
Hollow Inside
Paul Bell said:
Death is a mere crack in the ceiling, waiting to be fixed, but not really waiting.
I died and no one noticed.
A fitting epitaph.
Great write.
October 28th, 2025 10:24
Paul Bell said:
Death is a mere crack in the ceiling, waiting to be fixed, but not really waiting.
I died and no one noticed.
A fitting epitaph.
Great write.
October 28th, 2025 10:24
Hollow Inside
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of either meditation or death that are close to the same in that in meditation all around one dies. Lovely and a fave
October 28th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of either meditation or death that are close to the same in that in meditation all around one dies. Lovely and a fave
October 28th, 2025 09:14
Hollow Inside
Niko Papadatos said:
Excellent way to reflect, meditate. Good job!
October 28th, 2025 08:45
Niko Papadatos said:
Excellent way to reflect, meditate. Good job!
October 28th, 2025 08:45
Can\'t Delete Myself
Paul Bell said:
I think at some point we would all like to be deleted, or maybe the words deleted before we send them.
No doubt in the future the technology will be there.
October 27th, 2025 14:02
Paul Bell said:
I think at some point we would all like to be deleted, or maybe the words deleted before we send them.
No doubt in the future the technology will be there.
October 27th, 2025 14:02
Can\'t Delete Myself
peto said:
I love the rhyme
And self destructive vibe
Also killer ending
October 27th, 2025 04:06
peto said:
I love the rhyme
And self destructive vibe
Also killer ending
October 27th, 2025 04:06
Can\'t Delete Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor cast in modern technology it emphasizes that as long as one thinks the self can not be deleted or erased. An operating system can be uninstalled but if it can not be deleted one has to ask how much of it is hardware not software. A good read
October 27th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor cast in modern technology it emphasizes that as long as one thinks the self can not be deleted or erased. An operating system can be uninstalled but if it can not be deleted one has to ask how much of it is hardware not software. A good read
October 27th, 2025 04:06
She Used to be My Quiet
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last two lines of this poem so cleverly worded. Yes those that teach us peace and then take it with them when they leave says so much about the relationship. Well written
October 18th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last two lines of this poem so cleverly worded. Yes those that teach us peace and then take it with them when they leave says so much about the relationship. Well written
October 18th, 2025 04:16
She Used to be My Quiet
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you have to say thank-you to people who come into your life and change it.
It gives you power to be like them and the confidence to get out and find another.
October 18th, 2025 03:32
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you have to say thank-you to people who come into your life and change it.
It gives you power to be like them and the confidence to get out and find another.
October 18th, 2025 03:32
Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of desperation and hopelessness. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of desperation and hopelessness. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 15:31
Drown me quietly
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of imminent end merges with darkness and finally some sense of hope. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of imminent end merges with darkness and finally some sense of hope. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 14:40
Void
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation in the suit of depression a poem crying out to a deaf world. Well penned
June 22nd, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation in the suit of depression a poem crying out to a deaf world. Well penned
June 22nd, 2025 06:50
If I speak...
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and touching write, the call to be listen to, included and valued, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 10:04
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and touching write, the call to be listen to, included and valued, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 10:04
If I speak...
sorenbarrett said:
The words of the unheard call louder that the shouts of the deaf. A powerful poem that speaks to me. Lovely
June 18th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
The words of the unheard call louder that the shouts of the deaf. A powerful poem that speaks to me. Lovely
June 18th, 2025 08:05
Never
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write and description of someone trying to work through,pain, sadness of the past layer by layer, but fearing that when they get through all the layers, there will nothing to love, well written and expressed
June 16th, 2025 16:13
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write and description of someone trying to work through,pain, sadness of the past layer by layer, but fearing that when they get through all the layers, there will nothing to love, well written and expressed
June 16th, 2025 16:13
Never
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation of being oneself and a resignation to this that comes out strong, yet still a question of what lies beneath. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation of being oneself and a resignation to this that comes out strong, yet still a question of what lies beneath. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:43
Suffocating Darkness
RSM0812 said:
This poems tittle is well put into words with this piece. I especially like the last line. Suffocating in the darkness. Powerful and well written. \"Burried alive behind my eyes\". The rhythm and Metre are both also perfectly on par. Great job.
June 8th, 2025 09:53
RSM0812 said:
This poems tittle is well put into words with this piece. I especially like the last line. Suffocating in the darkness. Powerful and well written. \"Burried alive behind my eyes\". The rhythm and Metre are both also perfectly on par. Great job.
June 8th, 2025 09:53
Suffocating Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful loaded with wonderful images and metaphor. (Thoughts like teeth gnash at my bones) so vivid. What a splendid depiction of internal anguish. A fave
June 7th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful loaded with wonderful images and metaphor. (Thoughts like teeth gnash at my bones) so vivid. What a splendid depiction of internal anguish. A fave
June 7th, 2025 12:57
Scars
orchidee said:
It makes me shudder. I was at a self-help group, and tales of cutting, though understanding why they do it.
July 13th, 2022 13:45
orchidee said:
It makes me shudder. I was at a self-help group, and tales of cutting, though understanding why they do it.
July 13th, 2022 13:45
Am I fine?
orchidee said:
We do it though - we may not know the person well enough; not want to tell them why we may not be OK; not want to give them a blow-by-blow account; etc.
Some - maybe a few - we know more fully; feel we can confide in them; find life is bit better after, say, a cup of tea and a slice of cake together. I sound like Worzel Gummidge there. lol.
July 13th, 2022 13:43
orchidee said:
We do it though - we may not know the person well enough; not want to tell them why we may not be OK; not want to give them a blow-by-blow account; etc.
Some - maybe a few - we know more fully; feel we can confide in them; find life is bit better after, say, a cup of tea and a slice of cake together. I sound like Worzel Gummidge there. lol.
July 13th, 2022 13:43
Am I fine?
Goldfinch60 said:
At my age I now respond \" Well I got up this morning so all is well\".
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
At my age I now respond \" Well I got up this morning so all is well\".
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:23
Scars
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You are absolutely right here. They are a reminder that we carried on when it was difficult.
April 2nd, 2022 20:40
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You are absolutely right here. They are a reminder that we carried on when it was difficult.
April 2nd, 2022 20:40
Deranged
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I can relate to this as I feel that sadly, I\'m in a manipulative family. The way your own blood can have the audacity to exploit you is so disheartening. But you conveyed the message greatly.
April 1st, 2022 12:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I can relate to this as I feel that sadly, I\'m in a manipulative family. The way your own blood can have the audacity to exploit you is so disheartening. But you conveyed the message greatly.
April 1st, 2022 12:18
Deranged
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how your words reflect
the lyrics in Seal\'s \'Crazy\'..
thanks for sharing
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq8hdNMfArc )
April 1st, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how your words reflect
the lyrics in Seal\'s \'Crazy\'..
thanks for sharing
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq8hdNMfArc )
April 1st, 2022 05:51
The Darkness
Christina8 said:
I\'m sorry you are in this place, I have some dark past poetry too. Great write and thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:44
Christina8 said:
I\'m sorry you are in this place, I have some dark past poetry too. Great write and thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:44
The Darkness
Rocky Lagou said:
Raw and vulnerable. I can relate as I believe everyone can. Really well put.
March 31st, 2022 08:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Raw and vulnerable. I can relate as I believe everyone can. Really well put.
March 31st, 2022 08:28
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