Comments received on poems by jp



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L. B. Mek said:

thank you for sharing
these worded, outpouring
of infuriated, desperation
I dream of a day
when such words of veracity
won\'t be needed
let alone, ignored!!!
(So, so Powerful
so So, much insight
so Truthful, it\'s Ignored
by those who preach
Humanity\'s flaws
were born of Pandora\'s box
or an Eve that was subjected
to entrapment, measures
while
Eris and Apate
are loathed for being Goddesses
of discord and deceit..
Where as Korons and Ouranos
are lauded for their power
and
Cain\'s crimes, of introducing murder
to our mythical world
is forgotten, mentioned only
aside his brother
as a tale to learn form..
but Eve and Pandora
no, they\'re vilified at every turn
and all the little girls
fawned over for their
looks
from birth, are suddenly
after a certain birthday party
now
just another symbol, of Pandora and Eve
and then, those deluded zealot\'s
have the temerity
to ask, Gai and mother Mary
for mercy...
ahhh! fck
its hard, sometimes
to look at my nieces and not cry
thinking of all the strife
our accursed society
has waiting for them..)

April 11th, 2022 04:57

Goodbye Walt
L. B. Mek said:

such a sad read, but know
we all get overwhelmed at times..
stay strong, dear poet
(as for Feminist\'s
as long as theirs a single
Female
on Earth, that spark
of Feminist, brave defiance
shall never fade)


March 31st, 2022 02:40