Comments received on poems by rileyb
The Race
L. B. Mek said:
this! my kinda poem:
grabs you,
jostles you,
drags you
from line to verse
and then, breathless
dumps you
back out into reality
and all you can do
is jump back
to that start of the Race
to get a sense
of that thrill, just
one more time..
guess, I\'m a junky for Poesy
please
don\'t judge me , too harshly...
lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
this! my kinda poem:
grabs you,
jostles you,
drags you
from line to verse
and then, breathless
dumps you
back out into reality
and all you can do
is jump back
to that start of the Race
to get a sense
of that thrill, just
one more time..
guess, I\'m a junky for Poesy
please
don\'t judge me , too harshly...
lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 03:58