Comments received on poems by Gray C



The Mask
L. B. Mek said:

a great message
for far too often, those who wear masks
lose their own faces
and find their spines, swivelling
to each, trending wind..
still
at times\', when life throws
all the strife at us, all at once
we need a mask or two, simply
to survive...
(thanks for sharing, this is such a relatable theme)

August 5th, 2022 02:41

Weapon Of Truth... and Deceit
H. Jordan said:

really cool poem! the reader in me appreciates it!

July 9th, 2022 18:23

Playing With Fire
L. B. Mek said:

yup, our blinkered eyes
often yearn for those
that singe, our existence
the closer we get..
thanks for sharing, a relatable read

June 17th, 2022 03:57

Life and Death
L. B. Mek said:

an invaluable message
poetically realised, with practised skill
and written, so accessibly relatable
thanks for sharing

May 17th, 2022 04:51