Comments received on poems by a thousand wishes
Healing(Unfinished)
dtrusss said:
Sending you vibes to recognize your beautiful brilliance. Your recognition of sadness is powerful.
November 8th, 2023 15:42
dtrusss said:
Sending you vibes to recognize your beautiful brilliance. Your recognition of sadness is powerful.
November 8th, 2023 15:42
Healing(Unfinished)
David Wakeling said:
This is quiet sad.Maybe you need a pet yo cheer you up.try a kitten, they love you even when you are sad.
November 8th, 2023 14:22
David Wakeling said:
This is quiet sad.Maybe you need a pet yo cheer you up.try a kitten, they love you even when you are sad.
November 8th, 2023 14:22
Together
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰. I dont have any words for it
September 24th, 2022 05:25
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
This is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰. I dont have any words for it
September 24th, 2022 05:25
Together
GON said:
this is fucking awesome, it absolutely radiates ecstatic love and joy. good on you.
September 24th, 2022 04:53
GON said:
this is fucking awesome, it absolutely radiates ecstatic love and joy. good on you.
September 24th, 2022 04:53
A little girl
Esteven said:
Strong emotions well expressed, it was touching I felt your pain plus I enjoyed the flow
September 20th, 2022 16:00
Esteven said:
Strong emotions well expressed, it was touching I felt your pain plus I enjoyed the flow
September 20th, 2022 16:00
A little girl
skpearl said:
Metaphors and rhythm changes in your poem are impressive. You managed to make the words feel like they are surrounding the reader, especially when its someone who have similar experience. I really like this part:
\"a little girl that\'s been alone/no one is coming to save her/a little girl that\'s on her own /but surrounded by people that claim to love her\"
Magnificent and strong lines, smartly used.
September 19th, 2022 13:04
skpearl said:
Metaphors and rhythm changes in your poem are impressive. You managed to make the words feel like they are surrounding the reader, especially when its someone who have similar experience. I really like this part:
\"a little girl that\'s been alone/no one is coming to save her/a little girl that\'s on her own /but surrounded by people that claim to love her\"
Magnificent and strong lines, smartly used.
September 19th, 2022 13:04
A little girl
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
These lines hits very hard when you have experienced it specially.
September 19th, 2022 12:36
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
These lines hits very hard when you have experienced it specially.
September 19th, 2022 12:36
Punching bag
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Even a punching bag breaks after giving it pain relentlessly, so even he needs rest and happiness
September 18th, 2022 12:25
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Even a punching bag breaks after giving it pain relentlessly, so even he needs rest and happiness
September 18th, 2022 12:25
Dilemmas- part 2: Choices
shaa said:
Was in a bad mood but on reading this I feel myself ease up. Lovely write
September 17th, 2022 04:22
shaa said:
Was in a bad mood but on reading this I feel myself ease up. Lovely write
September 17th, 2022 04:22
Dilemmas: Part 1- Overthinking
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You literally, no seriously, you literally wrote the lines that i overthink everytime.
Best 🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️
September 15th, 2022 12:17
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You literally, no seriously, you literally wrote the lines that i overthink everytime.
Best 🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️
September 15th, 2022 12:17
I\'ll never say sorry 😐
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You don\'t have to, everything will be alright as the time goes.
September 12th, 2022 08:17
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You don\'t have to, everything will be alright as the time goes.
September 12th, 2022 08:17
I dont know/missing you
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of loss so poignantly in this poem. It can hit you any time, anywhere. Well penned my friend.
September 12th, 2022 06:16
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of loss so poignantly in this poem. It can hit you any time, anywhere. Well penned my friend.
September 12th, 2022 06:16
Thoughts
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Why is this so relatable? 😂 Really loved this one
September 10th, 2022 02:02
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Why is this so relatable? 😂 Really loved this one
September 10th, 2022 02:02
Thoughts
Raven333 said:
Well am telling you I loved it and that ain\'t no bullshit... I hear you my friend and I feel you.. excellent rhyme..
September 9th, 2022 20:52
Raven333 said:
Well am telling you I loved it and that ain\'t no bullshit... I hear you my friend and I feel you.. excellent rhyme..
September 9th, 2022 20:52
Thoughts
Christ said:
I love this, it\'s very relatable and the raw truth. I can\'t wait to see your future poetry and writing, as I encourage that you continue fulfilling your talent! :)
September 9th, 2022 17:49
Christ said:
I love this, it\'s very relatable and the raw truth. I can\'t wait to see your future poetry and writing, as I encourage that you continue fulfilling your talent! :)
September 9th, 2022 17:49
Timeless: Maybe (p#2 of 4)
shaa said:
After reading part 1, I desperately waited for part 2 and begun to wonder whether your muse had forsaken you turns out it was helping you weave yet another brilliant piece. I confess I\'ve fallen in tune with this one
September 7th, 2022 15:03
shaa said:
After reading part 1, I desperately waited for part 2 and begun to wonder whether your muse had forsaken you turns out it was helping you weave yet another brilliant piece. I confess I\'ve fallen in tune with this one
September 7th, 2022 15:03
Always
Bella Shepard said:
Love turns us upside down, inside out, it tugs, it pushes, but it can hold us tight and give us refuge. Beautifully expressed dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
Love turns us upside down, inside out, it tugs, it pushes, but it can hold us tight and give us refuge. Beautifully expressed dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 14:22
Timeless: Maybe (p#2 of 4)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
So much love, one of the best you wrote from my pov. I really liked it specially since im able to relate more than half of it
September 6th, 2022 13:12
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
So much love, one of the best you wrote from my pov. I really liked it specially since im able to relate more than half of it
September 6th, 2022 13:12
Timeless: Maybe (p#2 of 4)
Bella Shepard said:
Love is an emotion that has so many sides to it, and I think that you have captured this so well in this poem. A good write dear poet.
September 6th, 2022 13:00
Bella Shepard said:
Love is an emotion that has so many sides to it, and I think that you have captured this so well in this poem. A good write dear poet.
September 6th, 2022 13:00
Timeless: Sometimes (p#1 of 4)
shaa said:
Beautiful, I love this. Hits deep. Actually thought it was meant for me 🥲
September 5th, 2022 17:04
shaa said:
Beautiful, I love this. Hits deep. Actually thought it was meant for me 🥲
September 5th, 2022 17:04
This is your sign
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I hope the other person gets the point, mostly think that he/she is just saying for comfort but doesn\'t mean it. And it hurts sometimes.
September 5th, 2022 12:47
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I hope the other person gets the point, mostly think that he/she is just saying for comfort but doesn\'t mean it. And it hurts sometimes.
September 5th, 2022 12:47
This is your sign
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I hope the other person gets the point, mostly think that he/she is just saying for comfort but doesn\'t mean it. And it hurts sometimes.
September 4th, 2022 11:00
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I hope the other person gets the point, mostly think that he/she is just saying for comfort but doesn\'t mean it. And it hurts sometimes.
September 4th, 2022 11:00
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