Comments received on poems by a thousand wishes
Knock Knock
sorenbarrett said:
We all try to cover pain at times with humor. This poem was a great metaphor for this.
September 2nd, 2022 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
We all try to cover pain at times with humor. This poem was a great metaphor for this.
September 2nd, 2022 11:54
Losing you (the ode to pain)
shaa said:
Sad 😢 but amazing 🤩. Your words actually struck deep within...gosh! For a moment I thought it was addressed to me🤣. Great piece
September 2nd, 2022 07:59
shaa said:
Sad 😢 but amazing 🤩. Your words actually struck deep within...gosh! For a moment I thought it was addressed to me🤣. Great piece
September 2nd, 2022 07:59
Short poem: Drifiting
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You described that feeling of falling deep like in water, dark everywhere cant see cant breathe just tears flowing out of the eyes and the moment something broked inside and you starts to show a fake smile.
September 1st, 2022 15:46
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You described that feeling of falling deep like in water, dark everywhere cant see cant breathe just tears flowing out of the eyes and the moment something broked inside and you starts to show a fake smile.
September 1st, 2022 15:46
Sleep well tonight
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
The first line 🙂😭🤧
Did i say goodbye instead of goodnight?
August 30th, 2022 13:15
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
The first line 🙂😭🤧
Did i say goodbye instead of goodnight?
August 30th, 2022 13:15
Last letter
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Its so ironic that your dp says dude i dont care and all your poems are about the worries, worries about yourself, worries about someone else, so on.
August 23rd, 2022 13:19
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Its so ironic that your dp says dude i dont care and all your poems are about the worries, worries about yourself, worries about someone else, so on.
August 23rd, 2022 13:19
Last letter
Jonas Robinson said:
Clever write. I enjoyed this much so. Thank you for sharing. :)
August 22nd, 2022 22:59
Jonas Robinson said:
Clever write. I enjoyed this much so. Thank you for sharing. :)
August 22nd, 2022 22:59
The Days of recovery(Final day): Someone who loves me
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
So did you find yourself, the self love?
Its good anyway it is. 👍
August 21st, 2022 04:09
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
So did you find yourself, the self love?
Its good anyway it is. 👍
August 21st, 2022 04:09
The Days of recovery (Day 3): Judgement
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Judgement says it is for the better 😂.
Another good write, really like you writings.
August 21st, 2022 04:07
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Judgement says it is for the better 😂.
Another good write, really like you writings.
August 21st, 2022 04:07
The Days of recovery (Day 3): Judgement
L. B. Mek said:
so, like
you\'re Awesome! clearly
oh and another great poem
as well
its a privilege to read your work
thank you! for choosing to share
August 19th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
so, like
you\'re Awesome! clearly
oh and another great poem
as well
its a privilege to read your work
thank you! for choosing to share
August 19th, 2022 03:33
The Days of Recovery(Day 2): The girl in the mirror
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Something +ve after so many sad poems from you. You became a stronger version of the past you. The problems thay you once thought like a mountain are like a pebble today. That feeling, i can understand you while seeing myself in the mirror.
August 18th, 2022 00:55
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Something +ve after so many sad poems from you. You became a stronger version of the past you. The problems thay you once thought like a mountain are like a pebble today. That feeling, i can understand you while seeing myself in the mirror.
August 18th, 2022 00:55
The Days of Recovery(Day 1): A person I loved
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Such sad and deep emotions, and the pain they caused. I can\'t say much but they are just like this probably cause they Envy you.
August 18th, 2022 00:52
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Such sad and deep emotions, and the pain they caused. I can\'t say much but they are just like this probably cause they Envy you.
August 18th, 2022 00:52
The Days of Recovery(Day 1): A person I loved
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, I am so sorry for the anguish expressed in your poem. Love can turn on a dime, and what you never see coming hurts all the more coming from someone you trust. I truly hope that you will have happier days.
August 15th, 2022 13:37
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, I am so sorry for the anguish expressed in your poem. Love can turn on a dime, and what you never see coming hurts all the more coming from someone you trust. I truly hope that you will have happier days.
August 15th, 2022 13:37
Versions of me: The angry/powerless me (p8)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You are going through rough times but not to worry you will think of them as some small problem once it makes you stronger from inside and gave you a life lesson. And also another great write. I m amazed by the titles you write which totally summarises the whole poem.
August 13th, 2022 12:53
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You are going through rough times but not to worry you will think of them as some small problem once it makes you stronger from inside and gave you a life lesson. And also another great write. I m amazed by the titles you write which totally summarises the whole poem.
August 13th, 2022 12:53
Versions of me: The girl who (p7)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You see, you might think that i am just saying it but if you remove i am that girl to i am that boy, it nearly same for me. Avoiding eye contact, doing things to not break my heart, self conscious, inferiority, self doubt, dont like being the centre of attention, wants to be invisible, i am sad deep inside but still acts like nothing happened or i m the type who forgets his pain when with others so that they won\'t find me annoying or running away from questions, etc.... And so on
August 12th, 2022 14:58
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
You see, you might think that i am just saying it but if you remove i am that girl to i am that boy, it nearly same for me. Avoiding eye contact, doing things to not break my heart, self conscious, inferiority, self doubt, dont like being the centre of attention, wants to be invisible, i am sad deep inside but still acts like nothing happened or i m the type who forgets his pain when with others so that they won\'t find me annoying or running away from questions, etc.... And so on
August 12th, 2022 14:58
Versions of me: The girl who (p7)
cherm said:
Hi ATW. Well said, well written.
August 12th, 2022 14:12
cherm said:
Hi ATW. Well said, well written.
August 12th, 2022 14:12
Versions of me: The girl who (p7)
L. B. Mek said:
this is such a depressing read
mainly, because I assume
so many , can relate - intimately
with the hopelessness
and craving for affirmation
of worth
in these, most harrowing of words
you\'ve shared, dear Poet
just so, heartbreakingly sad
the hurt
we inflict, upon each other
generation, after wasted
generation...
August 11th, 2022 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
this is such a depressing read
mainly, because I assume
so many , can relate - intimately
with the hopelessness
and craving for affirmation
of worth
in these, most harrowing of words
you\'ve shared, dear Poet
just so, heartbreakingly sad
the hurt
we inflict, upon each other
generation, after wasted
generation...
August 11th, 2022 03:11
Versions of me: The hopeless and unavoidably random me (p6)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Another one *meme* (since i cant send memes here lol)... You described it so easily the joy and the feeling to be able to be yourself... I m kinda not good with that part i really like it when i am alone listening to music and its raining and you can inhale all that odours coming from soil and grass and etc etc
July 23rd, 2022 12:32
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Another one *meme* (since i cant send memes here lol)... You described it so easily the joy and the feeling to be able to be yourself... I m kinda not good with that part i really like it when i am alone listening to music and its raining and you can inhale all that odours coming from soil and grass and etc etc
July 23rd, 2022 12:32
Versions of me: The hopeless and unavoidably random me (p6)
Bella Shepard said:
Oh my friend, this is just priceless. You express so beautifully the sheer joy of just being, relishing every morsel of life in all of its unexpectedness. This truly made me smile with my heart . It\'s a fav!
July 22nd, 2022 16:54
Bella Shepard said:
Oh my friend, this is just priceless. You express so beautifully the sheer joy of just being, relishing every morsel of life in all of its unexpectedness. This truly made me smile with my heart . It\'s a fav!
July 22nd, 2022 16:54
Versions of me: The \"worried about the state of the world\" me (part 5)
L. B. Mek said:
oh checked out your wonderful blog
such uplifting colours
and thoroughly enjoyed your amygdala poem!
wish you all the best, hope
you achieve all that you seek
July 22nd, 2022 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
oh checked out your wonderful blog
such uplifting colours
and thoroughly enjoyed your amygdala poem!
wish you all the best, hope
you achieve all that you seek
July 22nd, 2022 04:19
Versions of me: The \"worried about the state of the world\" me (part 5)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why do people do the things they do?
First, we\'re happy then they screw
And screw and screw you over
I don’t believe in bad luck
But life just seems to fuck everyone up
So why do we stay in places
We don’t want to be?
Why don’t we ever just be
Who want to be?\'..
yeah, so
like I said before, you\'re
just Awesome
and this series
is getting better and better..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
(hope you\'re having as much
fun
writing them, as that you\'re gifting
those of us, delighting
in reading, them)
July 22nd, 2022 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why do people do the things they do?
First, we\'re happy then they screw
And screw and screw you over
I don’t believe in bad luck
But life just seems to fuck everyone up
So why do we stay in places
We don’t want to be?
Why don’t we ever just be
Who want to be?\'..
yeah, so
like I said before, you\'re
just Awesome
and this series
is getting better and better..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
(hope you\'re having as much
fun
writing them, as that you\'re gifting
those of us, delighting
in reading, them)
July 22nd, 2022 04:15
Versions of me: The \"worried about the state of the world\" me (part 5)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Good right, keep going and i am looking forward to next one!
July 21st, 2022 16:00
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Good right, keep going and i am looking forward to next one!
July 21st, 2022 16:00
Versions of me: The overthinking me (p4)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I could relate to this one... The feeling to hate yourself, the feeling to be getting used by others even though you trust them, the times when you feel like you dont wanna meat new people cause of many reasons, the feeling of wanting love but the fear that you will lose it once again...
The self-consciousness that people dislike you..
You see, even though i m just 18 but i am telling you people dont really give a fu*k about others, there are people who dont use others and there are always 2nd chances to start again just dont give up in between....
Hope you will do fine and i love reading your poems
July 21st, 2022 10:39
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
I could relate to this one... The feeling to hate yourself, the feeling to be getting used by others even though you trust them, the times when you feel like you dont wanna meat new people cause of many reasons, the feeling of wanting love but the fear that you will lose it once again...
The self-consciousness that people dislike you..
You see, even though i m just 18 but i am telling you people dont really give a fu*k about others, there are people who dont use others and there are always 2nd chances to start again just dont give up in between....
Hope you will do fine and i love reading your poems
July 21st, 2022 10:39
Versions of me: The overthinking me (p4)
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I\'m not good enough should I change
Now my mind\'s going to a different place
Can I change myself? Cause I don’t know who I am
Am I crazy? Do I hate me?
Is that what this is?
All this overthinking\'..
(I so relate! dear Poet
this
that, internal dialogue
between impassioned anxiety
and pragmatic logic..)
July 21st, 2022 01:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'If I\'m not good enough should I change
Now my mind\'s going to a different place
Can I change myself? Cause I don’t know who I am
Am I crazy? Do I hate me?
Is that what this is?
All this overthinking\'..
(I so relate! dear Poet
this
that, internal dialogue
between impassioned anxiety
and pragmatic logic..)
July 21st, 2022 01:49
Versions of me: The caring/loving me (p3)
L. B. Mek said:
\'All these possibilities
No more shooting at the breeze
You can have my love
No more being alone
Or lonely
No more crazing a home
There are endless rooms in my heart
For you, for everyone \'
(such soothing lines!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 01:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'All these possibilities
No more shooting at the breeze
You can have my love
No more being alone
Or lonely
No more crazing a home
There are endless rooms in my heart
For you, for everyone \'
(such soothing lines!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 01:46
Versions of me (part 1)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Respect+, after reading the other parts, i have no words for it really, i dont know about others but this one is the best among all the others... You wrote it so well, i mean hands off.... I trued to leave everyone too but they never showed there back to me and i am truly great full to them... I think you must have also wanted them to stay when you tried run away and ended up alone... If you are still going through it, i asure you that it\'s going to be just fine just keep going.... Sorry if it sounded strange but thats how i felt when i read it...
Best line for me is \" with no love lost to report\"
July 20th, 2022 11:40
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
Respect+, after reading the other parts, i have no words for it really, i dont know about others but this one is the best among all the others... You wrote it so well, i mean hands off.... I trued to leave everyone too but they never showed there back to me and i am truly great full to them... I think you must have also wanted them to stay when you tried run away and ended up alone... If you are still going through it, i asure you that it\'s going to be just fine just keep going.... Sorry if it sounded strange but thats how i felt when i read it...
Best line for me is \" with no love lost to report\"
July 20th, 2022 11:40
Versions of me: The tired me (p2)
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
It is one of the best ones i read up till now... I know how it feels when you are scared cause you love something too much.. when you are nearly at your limit and you you want someone to protect you from breaking... Every line hold something deep in this one.... This is how i viewed this poem.
July 20th, 2022 11:32
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
It is one of the best ones i read up till now... I know how it feels when you are scared cause you love something too much.. when you are nearly at your limit and you you want someone to protect you from breaking... Every line hold something deep in this one.... This is how i viewed this poem.
July 20th, 2022 11:32
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