Comments received on poems by smitherins



Young
Blueledge said:

It is unnecessarely a cruel world. What else is there to do but keep moving on.

June 4th, 2022 22:34

A message for my daughter. (teen mom story)
Noah Malice said:

you have a good heart, and trying to be better is a good step not everyone takes.

June 4th, 2022 19:30

More Comfortable. (Transgender identity)
L. B. Mek said:

if you\'re not hurting anyone
directly
then, simply accept and learn
to allow, things
to unfold, as they will...
be proud, in the You
that\'s trying to find
and Attain, your Better
stay, fallibly Beautiful
and be Proud
of your PRIDE
stay you, stay defiant, stay Brave
stay Strong! dear Poet
thanks for Choosing to share
\'Happy PRIDE month!\'


June 3rd, 2022 04:19

Young
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful to read your defiant voice
sorry for your struggles
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 2nd, 2022 04:10

Young
JudyStella said:

I am so sorry for your experiences😔 I hope you feel much better now. I love the imagery used in the poem. And the lines,
Her skin is very young,

But her mind is very old,
Are very nice! Where we understand though the girl is young her experiences have made her quite mature. If it’s possible could you please elaborate this phrase a bit if you are comfortable that is!(The hate was given to her,
By the love of a curl.) Thankyou for sharing this poem!

June 2nd, 2022 03:53