Comments received on poems by tej
Farewell
L. B. Mek said:
(honesty, and humility\'s
acceptance
is the key, I think
since
so much, is out of our control
even
for us few, who aspire to care
and reach-out, to
those connections we invest-in
wholeheartedly..
sadly
we simply can\'t, curate
fate
all we can do, is find strength
enough
to survive, adapt and believe
that our hopes
will be rewarded
by some karma-like, justice
vindicator
of good intentions and dreams..
be we the victims
or
the lovers, cursed
to watch-on
from a distance, draped
in crushing, feelings
of ineptness - despite
giving it all we\'ve got
and more...)
I laud your bravery!
stay Strong
thank you! for choosing to share
June 21st, 2022 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
(honesty, and humility\'s
acceptance
is the key, I think
since
so much, is out of our control
even
for us few, who aspire to care
and reach-out, to
those connections we invest-in
wholeheartedly..
sadly
we simply can\'t, curate
fate
all we can do, is find strength
enough
to survive, adapt and believe
that our hopes
will be rewarded
by some karma-like, justice
vindicator
of good intentions and dreams..
be we the victims
or
the lovers, cursed
to watch-on
from a distance, draped
in crushing, feelings
of ineptness - despite
giving it all we\'ve got
and more...)
I laud your bravery!
stay Strong
thank you! for choosing to share
June 21st, 2022 03:39
This place is scary.
a thousand wishes said:
I love this piece, It´s really beautful. and I understand panicking and some of the feelings. This poem is brimming with so many different emotions. I love the way you wrote this and that you wrote it straight from your heart, mind, and soul.
June 12th, 2022 09:11
a thousand wishes said:
I love this piece, It´s really beautful. and I understand panicking and some of the feelings. This poem is brimming with so many different emotions. I love the way you wrote this and that you wrote it straight from your heart, mind, and soul.
June 12th, 2022 09:11
This place is scary.
Goddess of the Mist said:
What a cool poem! It seems to be about gaming/virtual reality. Again, very cool.
June 11th, 2022 16:50
Goddess of the Mist said:
What a cool poem! It seems to be about gaming/virtual reality. Again, very cool.
June 11th, 2022 16:50
This place is scary.
chloewrites said:
This piece was beautiful. I loved the detail and emotion put into it. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
June 11th, 2022 15:50
chloewrites said:
This piece was beautiful. I loved the detail and emotion put into it. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
June 11th, 2022 15:50
