Comments received on poems by Ngonidzashe Tinago
Dear Mr President
L. B. Mek said:
\'Recalling history from the back of your hand
Ironic!
Let me take you to the streets of Soweto
Where human blood is still being shed\'..
Proof
that, \'the Aged\'
are wilfully, Blind
to the wisdom of Youth...
(keep writing, keep believing
keep Hoping and Living, while
seeking, those shards
of a shooting star\'s, imagery
for even if your, eyes
may not see the yield of your efforts
maybe, someday
another, will excavate and carry
your dream
into realisable, ambition..
stay strong, dear Poet
cherish your gifted smiles
and painless, breaths
of life
and Fight, till your very last ink
tattoos
that blank page, you traverse
as your path in life...
in Hope, we Entrust!
June 16th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Recalling history from the back of your hand
Ironic!
Let me take you to the streets of Soweto
Where human blood is still being shed\'..
Proof
that, \'the Aged\'
are wilfully, Blind
to the wisdom of Youth...
(keep writing, keep believing
keep Hoping and Living, while
seeking, those shards
of a shooting star\'s, imagery
for even if your, eyes
may not see the yield of your efforts
maybe, someday
another, will excavate and carry
your dream
into realisable, ambition..
stay strong, dear Poet
cherish your gifted smiles
and painless, breaths
of life
and Fight, till your very last ink
tattoos
that blank page, you traverse
as your path in life...
in Hope, we Entrust!
June 16th, 2022 05:28