Comments received on poems by jayohess



Maybe the Moon Grieves Too
JudyStella said:

The emotions are brought out so well along with the imagery! The line where the moon compares herself to the sun is very nice!

July 11th, 2022 15:17

Maybe the Moon Grieves Too
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Some beautiful line / thoughts in this , tho sad . I’m sorry for your loss . A nicely expressed writing

July 11th, 2022 01:04