Comments received on poems by Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla



Shame On You
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely crafted write expressing feelings of the ongoing conflicts and troubles in their homeland, nicely written

August 1st, 2025 01:01

Shame On You
sorenbarrett said:

This poem not quite prophesy not quite anti war protest it lies somewhere in between. Nicely done

July 31st, 2025 21:29

Falling Deeper In Heartache
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 30th, 2025 19:52

Falling Deeper In Heartache
sorenbarrett said:

A tragic poem of conflict grown out of control. Well written

July 30th, 2025 18:38

The Hardness Of Life
Poetic Licence said:

Those who have never felt pain will never truly appreciate how good it is to be pain Free, nicely expressed and written write

July 28th, 2025 23:31

The Hardness Of Life
sorenbarrett said:



July 28th, 2025 19:02

The Hardness Of Life
sorenbarrett said:

Contrast is necessary to appreciate either one or the other. A person that never felt pain doesn\'t know how good it is to be pain free. Nicely written

July 28th, 2025 19:02

Longing for a Lasting Peace
Elina Alamani said:

Touching. Gives the impression that it comes from your heart.

October 13th, 2023 13:12

Longing for a Lasting Peace
Parisab said:

Beauty can grow from ashes in your powerful poetry…

June 25th, 2023 12:16

Just Around The Corner
Parisab said:

The poem never stops dreaming and hoping, even under unpleasant and dire conditions-

May 16th, 2023 13:10

The Three Arrows
2781 said:

In Nebuchadnezzar\'s first dream the final kingdom was one of iron and miry clay. Just as iron doesn\'t mix with clay we have a divided society in the last days.
Unfortunately I don\'t think Democracy can achieve the freedom it offers. It gives the people a vote, but doesn\'t make everyone happy. We need a benevolent dictator to bring true righteousness.

May 14th, 2023 18:08

The Days of Heart-Breaking Violence
2781 said:

Lord bless the honourable men.
These are the ones on you can depend.

April 29th, 2023 10:31

Please Quit The Fight
Parisab said:

May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all

April 29th, 2023 01:06

The Pain Of Missing You
Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla said:

I do appreciate your comment on my poem . Oh، she went into life after death . May God mercy upon her .Ameen.

August 20th, 2022 18:18

The Pain Of Missing You
jayb_garang said:

May God comfort you brother and may Zainab shine on her way

August 20th, 2022 17:31

Walking On Air
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful!
thanks for sharing

July 21st, 2022 00:31