Comments received on poems by Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla
Like Rain On Dust
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and devotion and a plea for togetherness. Nicely said
August 12th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and devotion and a plea for togetherness. Nicely said
August 12th, 2025 13:48
Forever And Always
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write off love and commitment, side by side they will face life together and support each other , enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 00:56
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write off love and commitment, side by side they will face life together and support each other , enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 00:56
Forever And Always
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem of devotion and commitment. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem of devotion and commitment. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 18:12
Every Time You Smile
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of truly being in love brings alive all the senses and all the nicer sides of life, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of truly being in love brings alive all the senses and all the nicer sides of life, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 06:45
Every Time You Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A seasoning to the food, love enhances all the flavors of the world, its aroma awakens sleeping senses and opens a hunger that is sleeping inside a most lovely write well expressed.
August 5th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A seasoning to the food, love enhances all the flavors of the world, its aroma awakens sleeping senses and opens a hunger that is sleeping inside a most lovely write well expressed.
August 5th, 2025 06:36
Once You Hit A certain Age
sorenbarrett said:
War and violence sadly addressed in this poem. Nicely written
August 4th, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
War and violence sadly addressed in this poem. Nicely written
August 4th, 2025 15:22
Fighting Your Own Enemy
sorenbarrett said:
It is evident that it is about war and your note makes sense as to the location. Well written it is powerful and condemning in its nature. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is evident that it is about war and your note makes sense as to the location. Well written it is powerful and condemning in its nature. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 07:43
The Distress Of Wreck
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting and sad write of continued violence and bloodshed, and the devastation and destruction it causes to the people and the country, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 12:35
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting and sad write of continued violence and bloodshed, and the devastation and destruction it causes to the people and the country, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 12:35
The Distress Of Wreck
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of violence and bloodshed leaves a tragic and sad mood. Well written
August 2nd, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of violence and bloodshed leaves a tragic and sad mood. Well written
August 2nd, 2025 08:40
Wailing Is Not Enough
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant write of the ongoing struggle to survive in a country ravaged by internal war and fighting. Amongst all the darkness still hanging on to the hope there will be peace, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 17:04
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant write of the ongoing struggle to survive in a country ravaged by internal war and fighting. Amongst all the darkness still hanging on to the hope there will be peace, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 17:04
Wailing Is Not Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event that seems to have no answers. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event that seems to have no answers. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 16:09
Shame On You
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing feelings of the ongoing conflicts and troubles in their homeland, nicely written
August 1st, 2025 01:01
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing feelings of the ongoing conflicts and troubles in their homeland, nicely written
August 1st, 2025 01:01
Shame On You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem not quite prophesy not quite anti war protest it lies somewhere in between. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem not quite prophesy not quite anti war protest it lies somewhere in between. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 21:29
Falling Deeper In Heartache
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of conflict grown out of control. Well written
July 30th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of conflict grown out of control. Well written
July 30th, 2025 18:38
The Hardness Of Life
Poetic Licence said:
Those who have never felt pain will never truly appreciate how good it is to be pain Free, nicely expressed and written write
July 28th, 2025 23:31
Poetic Licence said:
Those who have never felt pain will never truly appreciate how good it is to be pain Free, nicely expressed and written write
July 28th, 2025 23:31
The Hardness Of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Contrast is necessary to appreciate either one or the other. A person that never felt pain doesn\'t know how good it is to be pain free. Nicely written
July 28th, 2025 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Contrast is necessary to appreciate either one or the other. A person that never felt pain doesn\'t know how good it is to be pain free. Nicely written
July 28th, 2025 19:02
Longing for a Lasting Peace
Elina Alamani said:
Touching. Gives the impression that it comes from your heart.
October 13th, 2023 13:12
Elina Alamani said:
Touching. Gives the impression that it comes from your heart.
October 13th, 2023 13:12
Longing for a Lasting Peace
Parisab said:
Beauty can grow from ashes in your powerful poetry…
June 25th, 2023 12:16
Parisab said:
Beauty can grow from ashes in your powerful poetry…
June 25th, 2023 12:16
Just Around The Corner
Parisab said:
The poem never stops dreaming and hoping, even under unpleasant and dire conditions-
May 16th, 2023 13:10
Parisab said:
The poem never stops dreaming and hoping, even under unpleasant and dire conditions-
May 16th, 2023 13:10
The Three Arrows
2781 said:
In Nebuchadnezzar\'s first dream the final kingdom was one of iron and miry clay. Just as iron doesn\'t mix with clay we have a divided society in the last days.
Unfortunately I don\'t think Democracy can achieve the freedom it offers. It gives the people a vote, but doesn\'t make everyone happy. We need a benevolent dictator to bring true righteousness.
May 14th, 2023 18:08
2781 said:
In Nebuchadnezzar\'s first dream the final kingdom was one of iron and miry clay. Just as iron doesn\'t mix with clay we have a divided society in the last days.
Unfortunately I don\'t think Democracy can achieve the freedom it offers. It gives the people a vote, but doesn\'t make everyone happy. We need a benevolent dictator to bring true righteousness.
May 14th, 2023 18:08
The Days of Heart-Breaking Violence
2781 said:
Lord bless the honourable men.
These are the ones on you can depend.
April 29th, 2023 10:31
2781 said:
Lord bless the honourable men.
These are the ones on you can depend.
April 29th, 2023 10:31
Please Quit The Fight
Parisab said:
May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all
April 29th, 2023 01:06
Parisab said:
May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all
April 29th, 2023 01:06
The Pain Of Missing You
Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla said:
I do appreciate your comment on my poem . Oh، she went into life after death . May God mercy upon her .Ameen.
August 20th, 2022 18:18
Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla said:
I do appreciate your comment on my poem . Oh، she went into life after death . May God mercy upon her .Ameen.
August 20th, 2022 18:18
The Pain Of Missing You
jayb_garang said:
May God comfort you brother and may Zainab shine on her way
August 20th, 2022 17:31
jayb_garang said:
May God comfort you brother and may Zainab shine on her way
August 20th, 2022 17:31
