Comments received on poems by AgingWings22



Flamingo Walls
Paul Bell said:

Sounds like a good time to me.

September 28th, 2022 14:03

Black Iron
Jonas Robinson said:

A nice catchy rhythm with a bit of originality too. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. :)

August 22nd, 2022 23:04

The Depth of Whispers
L. B. Mek said:

great creativity
really enjoy, unique perspectives like this
makes for such an intriguing read
thanks for sharing

August 15th, 2022 03:44

Ground Level Flight
L. B. Mek said:

great title, and such a vivid read
for such a short write
thanks for sharing

August 11th, 2022 03:06

The Artists World
L. B. Mek said:

this is so relatable
thanks for sharing
(creativity, as burden
imagination, as muse
we soldier on
armed, with nature\'s tools)..


August 9th, 2022 02:20

Sand & Dust
L. B. Mek said:

(indeed
those unseen and the unforeseen
invading
with their hurricane twist\'s of fate
and all we can do, is watch-on
hoping
someone, somewhere
has a clue...)
a wonderful shorty, thanks for sharing

August 8th, 2022 04:01

the Sculptors
Jasmine Swift said:

It doesn\'t rhyme, yet it flows so well. What kind of amazing sorcery is this?

August 7th, 2022 19:15

The Beauty in Towers
Jasmine Swift said:

I really like how many sensory details you used in this. It really paints the picture well.

August 7th, 2022 19:13

Hanging Branches
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery
of that interconnectivity
in all-things, \'matter\'
your metaphors picture..
a lovely read, thanks for sharing

August 5th, 2022 02:37

the Sculptors
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
\'endeavours of passion
love\'s, actualisation\'

August 4th, 2022 02:56