Comments received on poems by Michi2.0
We weren\'t meant to be.
shaa said:
If only wishes were horses. We really love wishing, beauty of life.
September 4th, 2022 07:33
shaa said:
If only wishes were horses. We really love wishing, beauty of life.
September 4th, 2022 07:33
I\'m Sorry.
L. B. Mek said:
let me be the first, to forgive you
now
its up to you, can you find it
in, you
to forgive yourself
for the things done
to, You!
if so, then run
run away
from any who cause you pain
find an escape
be it in reality or that mindscape
and plan and plot and write
it all out
how, you\'re gonna win
in life
despite it all, in spite of it all!
fated circumstances of life
be damned
You! are gonna survive and someday
long after you\'ve forgotten these words
even, THRIVE!
I wish you, all the Best
August 16th, 2022 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
let me be the first, to forgive you
now
its up to you, can you find it
in, you
to forgive yourself
for the things done
to, You!
if so, then run
run away
from any who cause you pain
find an escape
be it in reality or that mindscape
and plan and plot and write
it all out
how, you\'re gonna win
in life
despite it all, in spite of it all!
fated circumstances of life
be damned
You! are gonna survive and someday
long after you\'ve forgotten these words
even, THRIVE!
I wish you, all the Best
August 16th, 2022 04:48
A Love That Wasn\'t Meant To Be
L. B. Mek said:
seamless rhythm, a wonderfully relatable read
thanks for sharing
August 11th, 2022 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
seamless rhythm, a wonderfully relatable read
thanks for sharing
August 11th, 2022 03:39
The Past
L. B. Mek said:
because
our arms, need something new
to hold
be it a pillow or a pet
just, something warm will do
so that we\'re not always being reminded
of what is missing..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing
but
we must be very careful
that we don\'t grab
the next warm body, in reach
or else we start a cycle of neediness
where only we get hurt
time-n-again)
August 4th, 2022 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
because
our arms, need something new
to hold
be it a pillow or a pet
just, something warm will do
so that we\'re not always being reminded
of what is missing..
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing
but
we must be very careful
that we don\'t grab
the next warm body, in reach
or else we start a cycle of neediness
where only we get hurt
time-n-again)
August 4th, 2022 03:31
Thinking ahead
L. B. Mek said:
\'this be, the other side of affection\'s coin\'
with each breath that our feeling\'s
grow, anxiety begins
digs-in deeper, into those gaps
of insecurities and uncertainties
to taint, even this brief experience
of happiness
(that\'s why our bruises and scars
are so scary to contemplate..)
thanks for sharing, a relatable read
August 1st, 2022 02:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'this be, the other side of affection\'s coin\'
with each breath that our feeling\'s
grow, anxiety begins
digs-in deeper, into those gaps
of insecurities and uncertainties
to taint, even this brief experience
of happiness
(that\'s why our bruises and scars
are so scary to contemplate..)
thanks for sharing, a relatable read
August 1st, 2022 02:33
