Comments received on poems by Unknowables_64
Going Nuclear: A Short Story
L. B. Mek said:
\'his militia of fingers\'
and
\'the rapacious creatures ravaged their way to the core of his heart, fangs digging into the deepest coils of the artery,\'
what skill you possess, wonderful prose
(comparable to Osamu Dazai\'s
theme
in \'no longer human\')
a privilege to read, thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'his militia of fingers\'
and
\'the rapacious creatures ravaged their way to the core of his heart, fangs digging into the deepest coils of the artery,\'
what skill you possess, wonderful prose
(comparable to Osamu Dazai\'s
theme
in \'no longer human\')
a privilege to read, thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:59
The Butterfly: a Freestyle Poem
thinkerbell said:
Very well written poem
Loved the the ending -\'there was now hope on the horizon
One day we\'ll all fly\'🥰🥰
July 30th, 2022 11:31
thinkerbell said:
Very well written poem
Loved the the ending -\'there was now hope on the horizon
One day we\'ll all fly\'🥰🥰
July 30th, 2022 11:31