Dimly lit whispers
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery, you have a great poetic feel for highlighting
your poetry\'s flow
knowing when to embellish and when to leave alone
(like in this middle stanza, below)
\'illuminating what I thought I knew
what I saw through my cold view

amber breath,
ember sparks
all their brains are numb

Don’t look don’t see
with lights flickering,
and whirling breath \'
thanks for sharing, a great read!


August 19th, 2022 03:57