Comments received on poems by Raymond shawa
A SWEET POISON
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet poison indeed is love and your verse its preciousness with ease -- am putting this little gem into my list of favourites - thank you for sharing your take on love\'s changeable face Raymond.
September 9th, 2022 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet poison indeed is love and your verse its preciousness with ease -- am putting this little gem into my list of favourites - thank you for sharing your take on love\'s changeable face Raymond.
September 9th, 2022 04:33
THE FOREVER BEST FRIEND
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunningly inventive you capture the darts of the ego so well Raymond. Am looking forward to reading more of your work.
September 9th, 2022 04:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunningly inventive you capture the darts of the ego so well Raymond. Am looking forward to reading more of your work.
September 9th, 2022 04:30
A SWEET POISON
jarcher54 said:
OK, this is intriguing and a bit scary! I like the complexity of your diction, the thrusting of your thoughts into phrases, jabbiing my brain to insert ideas and feelings. Looking forward to more from you young man.
September 9th, 2022 02:33
jarcher54 said:
OK, this is intriguing and a bit scary! I like the complexity of your diction, the thrusting of your thoughts into phrases, jabbiing my brain to insert ideas and feelings. Looking forward to more from you young man.
September 9th, 2022 02:33
