Comments received on poems by Ninkasi



Love song
Caring dove said:

This is a beautiful writing )) nicely expressed

November 2nd, 2022 13:43

Love song
Fay Slimm. said:

A gem of a write - such passion gently portrayed - thank you for sharing it dear Ninkasi

November 2nd, 2022 07:31

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Neville said:



Absolutely splendid .. Neville

October 31st, 2022 06:20

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Fay Slimm. said:

A stunningly good use of metaphor - I love those drunken curtains in the linguistic delight of your second stanza.

October 28th, 2022 11:03

SHADOWS
Fay Slimm. said:

The essence of shadows that meander in memories is so expertly penned in this gem of a piece. Welcome to MPS and hope to read more of your work Ninkasi.

October 28th, 2022 07:27

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L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

October 28th, 2022 06:27

EMBEDDED WHIMS
Ninkasi said:

That is so amazing. An exchange of thoughts would be so much more inspiring.

October 21st, 2022 01:29

SHADOWS
Neville said:


if those first two are anything to go by, I think I and a whole bunch of other folk here are gonna get along like a house on fire ... Neville

October 20th, 2022 06:07

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Neville said:


I am delighted you found me today, otherwise I may not have found this page .. and which I must say, I was most impressed with ... Neville :)


October 20th, 2022 06:05

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jarcher54 said:

I\'ll just say that this is breathtakingly lovely. It is gauzy and sounds so haunting when read aloud. This is what poetry can be!

October 14th, 2022 19:03

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Paul Bell said:

That\'s the problem with yesterdays, they always seem to stop you moving on. A bit like recycling, it just comes back as something different.

October 12th, 2022 06:45