Comments received on poems by Avi



LAST GAME
Mr. Not said:

\"its only you and yourself who\'ll live together\" holds such great meaning.

September 24th, 2022 11:08

LAST GAME
Doggerel Dave said:

\'Life\'s a Game\'? - Agreed. And it IS \'how you play it\' that counts. There\'s other solid gold principles in there.
But people don\'t need that advice, do they?🙂....\'fraid some do....


September 23rd, 2022 19:03

TWO STRANGERS
shaa said:

Beautiful

September 15th, 2022 10:25

When I Was Thirteen
Avi said:

Thank you so much 😊

September 14th, 2022 11:15

When I Was Thirteen
shaa said:

I love the end,very introspective... what a great way to start your ink. Hope to see more of your work

September 14th, 2022 11:10

When I Was Thirteen
Vansh Arya said:

Good start

September 14th, 2022 10:22